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2011年大学英语六级改错模拟练习题14

Unlike any earlier building complex anywhere in the world, Rocke-
Feller in New York City was built, not for a place where people could 1. _______
live in, but as a city in which they could work. It was one of the 2._______
smallest building projects of its kind, a city within city, and of the forerunner 3. ____
of projects that has sprung up all over the world. 30 architects, 120 draftsmen, 4. __
and hundreds of other artists and technicians are employed just to 5. ______
draft the plan. Before the buildings could be erect, 229 old buildings had 6. _____
to be emptied of 4,000 tenants and razed. Just to buy up the leases took
over two years and cost over $6,000,000. The unusual shape and setbacks
of the 70-story RCA building resulted primary from practical considerations 7. ______
such as lighting, the movement of people and the building’s services.
The lower concourse and basement level were set aside for shops. A
Sunken plaza, complete with yards and fountains, were designed to provide 8. ____
access in these shops. Today the plaza, which is used for ice-skating 9. _____
winter and dining and dancing in summer,
is one of the center’s most popular attraction. 10. _________
1.for -%26gt; as
介词误用。根据句意,此处意思是“作为”的意思,故用as。
2.去掉第一个in
句子结构混乱。此处定语从句的关系副词为where,证明从句缺地点状语;live后面如果使用in,那么从句就只却宾语,所以将in去掉。
3.smallest -%26gt; biggest
逻辑错误。整篇文章讲的都是纽约城洛克菲勒地区的建设如何完善和巨大,因此它成为“城中城”,可见此处要说的是“它是同类型项目中最大的一个”,故将smallest改为biggest
4.has -%26gt; have
主谓不一致。定语从句的谓语动词应该和先行词保持一致,此处先行词为复数,所以谓语动词用have。
5.are -%26gt; were
整篇文章的基本时态为一般过去时,此处依然将过去的事情,故将are改为were。
6.erect -%26gt; erected
此处是典型的被动语态,系动词后面要使用过去分词。
7.primary -%26gt; primarily
词性混淆。此处应该用副词修饰动词resulted。
8.were -%26gt; was
主谓不一致。本句的主语为A Sunken plaza,而complete with yards and fountains只是插入语,所以谓语动词要用单数。
9.in -%26gt; to
此处access to 意为“通向…的入口”,与其相关的词组还有have access to(to为介词) ,意思为“有权利…,有机会做…” 。
10.attraction -%26gt; attractions
名次单复数问题。前面有了one of,attraction又时可数名词,故使用复数
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