会计考友 发表于 2012-8-14 11:29:10

英语专业八级改错练习题及答案解析(七十二)

  Childhood is a time when there are few responsibilities
  to make life difficult. If a child has good parents, he
  is fed, looked after and loved, what he may do, It is __1__
  improbable that he will ever again in his life be given
  so much without having to do anything in turn. In addition, __2__
  life is always presenting new things to the child—things
  that have lost their interesting for older people because __3__
  they are too well-known. A child finds pleasure in playing
  in the rain, or in the snow.His first visit to the
  seaside is a marvelous adventure. But a child has his pains:
  He is not so free to do as he wishes as he thinks old
  people do; he is continually being told not to do things, __4__
  or being punished for that he has done wrong. __5__
  His life is therefore not longer perfectly happy.  __6__
  When the young man starts to earn his own living, he
  becomes free from the discipline of school and parents;
  but at the same time he is forced to accept responsibilities.
  He can not longer expect others to pay for his food, his
  clothes, and his room, but has to work if he wants to live
  comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in __7__
  the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. __8__
  And if he breaks the laws of society as he used to break
  the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, __9__
  he works hard, keeps out of trouble and has good health,
  he can have the great happiness of seeing himself making __10__
  steady progress in his job and of building up for himself
  his own position in society.

会计考友 发表于 2012-8-14 11:29:11

英语专业八级改错练习题及答案解析(七十二)

  答案及解析:
  1.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句,相当于no matter what,意思是“无论什么”,“不管什么”,whatever在从句中作宾语。
  2.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”,而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。
  3.interesting改为interest。在形容词性物主代词their的后面应跟名词性成分。
  4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。
  5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句,在本句中应该使用关系代词what,相当于the thing/ things that。
  6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer”
  7.comfortable改为comfortably。修饰动词live应为副词而不是形容词。
  8.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。
  9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。
  10.making 改为 make。
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