托福写作:寻找托福写作分数低的原因(5)
托福写作:寻找托福写作分数低的原因(5)不间断句子(Run-on Sentences)
什么叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。中华考试网
例1. There are many ways we get to know the outside world。
剖析:这个句子包含了两层完整的意思:“There are many ways。” 以及“We get to know the outside world。”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。
改为:
There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或:
There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world。
以上托福写作几种情况,在大家有目共睹的情况下诞生了,不知你是否犯过同样低级的托福写作错误呢,为了跟上我们21世纪,我们还是走上高级的人生,避免哪些低级error吧。
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