新GRE考试Issue主题范文整理（11）
! l+ s# N$ S: X/ H( LEssay Response — Score 1
9 S# O# q. }5 ^) B5 h Humans have invented machines but they have forgot it and have started everything technically so clearly their thinking process is deterioating.# K9 V- G, v) B4 o" O* `% o. A `
Reader Commentary for Essay Response — Score 1来自www.Examw.com
" f5 G; M2 }( E9 x The essay is clearly on topic, as evidenced by the writer's usage of the more significant terms from the prompt: "technically" (technologically), "humans," "thinking" (think) and "deteriorating" (deteriorate). Such usage is the only clear evidence of understanding. Meaning aside, the brevity of the essay (one sentence) clearly indicates the writer's inability to develop a response that follows the specific instructions given ("Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement above and explain your reasoning for the position you take").
" ?+ g* n0 `: ^$ o7 e1 j The language, too, is clearly level 1, as the sentence fails to achieve coherence. The coherent phrases in this one-sentence response are those tied to the prompt: "Humans have invented machines" and "their thinking process is deteriorating." Otherwise, the point being made is unclear |
发表于 2012-8-15 12:52:21
