满分四六级作文：“新概念”背出来的

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很多学员通过自学，或者跟着老师学习新概念英语学了好久，就是找不到提高英语的真正法则。新概念英语的妙处不是三言两语可以表述清楚，今天，就用新概念三册里的部分句子来演绎一篇满分六级作文。
# W  M- y; b4 Y) N# s1 K　　首先展示的是八句新三的句子，当把这些句子背诵完了以后，就可以仿照类似的结构写一篇满分文章。
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　　As the parents had five children, life was a perpetual struggle against poverty. They were expecting their sixth child and were faced with even more pressing economic problems. If they had only had one child, the fact would have passed unnoticed.
　　家里已有五个孩子，全家人常年在贫困中挣扎。第六个孩子即将问世，他们面临着更加严峻的经济问题。如果他们只是再得一个孩子的话，这件事情也会悄无声息地过去的。 L-38-13:
　　Historians have long been puzzled by dots, lines and symbols.
　　历史学家一直被一些点，线和符号感到困惑不解。 L4-7
- C! @, D7 [( a　　I used to work as a dustman in NOS.
　　我在新东方任清洁工一职。 　
　　L41-11
- M* R1 Z+ h3 h) b8 A' l/ O5 t　　My friend fails to mention the long and friendless winter evenings in front of the TV---virtually the only form of entertainment.
　　我的朋友没有提到在电视机前度过漫长而寂寞的冬夜——电视几乎是唯一的娱乐形式。 L33-10
　　As if this were not enough to reduce you to tears, your husband arrives.
# d( W) h" H/ b) P( G2 S8 n/ T　　如果这还不足以让你掉眼泪，你老公又回来了。
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9 L% J! q) I* C& I; C( I, s' O7 ~8 {1 p/ U1 T　　There were hardly any trees on the island and there was no water, but this did not prove to be a problem.
" Y/ `/ n: G; k　　岛上几乎没有树和水，但这并不是个问题。 L2-1
) [' F1 A/ Q# `) k& p  z. D　　Our vicar is always raising money for one cause or another, but he has never managed to get enough money to have the church clock repaired.
/ A7 i* {2 O4 e　　我们的牧师总是为这事、那事筹集资金，但始终未能筹足资金把教堂的钟修好。 L59-15
　　As she is not rich, the chances that she will be able to afford such purchases are remote.
　　由于她并不富裕，所以她买得起这些东西的可能性极小。
  G5 L% u1 n" d! e- y  a　　下面是2005年1月的六级考试作文题目，经过仔细分析，我们可以把文章写成如下的结构，后面是参考译文。受篇幅影响，就没有一一去分析写作的思路，但是文章中的好多巨型结构都是上面八句英文句子的翻版。
' d/ o$ L5 F! C5 b+ G  `+ H- I. @　　2005.1 CET-6 Writing:
9 c2 r' \5 ^1 S  T* H　　1. 对病人的简单介绍：目前的病情和家庭情况
! c7 r, y) c3 L　　2.目前的困难：无法继续承担医疗费用，需要护理
0 M% {9 [2 e) c' A7 o& C* L　　3.希望捐助，联系方式
: G! c% J& O! q4 w+ I0 K( ]: G　　Dear friends,
! P6 W, x8 {( ~9 L, x* Q  J　　Here is a story of an unfortunate boy.
4 H2 o* u% X. O1 }% {　　Jack, an undergraduate of English College, has long been assailed by grave disease. He was born in a miserable family where life is a perpetual struggle against poverty. His father works as a dustman with narrow wages, virtually the only source of income of the family. Life is wretched indeed. As if this were not enough to reduce them to tears, the father had his both legs broken some time ago The loss of job makes the whole family faced with even more economic odds. Normal living proves to be a problem, not to mention the huge sums of medical expenses. Chances that he will be fully recovered are remote considering the lack of money
　　So, we shouldn’t let the misfortune pass unnoticed. On behalf of the student union, I would like to ask for your help. Your kindness and generosity will put the family out of trouble. Whoever will make donations is requested to dial 010-62605000
　　Profound thanks from,
& O, H* Y/ D/ m5 l) d　　Student Union
　　朋友们：
　　下面是一则有关一个不幸男孩的故事：
　　Jack是一个英语学院的本科生，一直被严重的疾病折磨着。他出生在一个凄惨的家庭，长年生活拮据。他爸爸是个清洁工，挣钱很少而且是家庭收入的唯一来源。生活确实很惨。如果这还不足以使他们掉眼泪的话，他爸爸在前段时间又摔伤了腿。失业使得整个家庭的生活更加困难。正常的生活都还是个问题，更别提高昂的医疗费用了。所以他痊愈的可能性太渺茫了。考虑到没钱，他痊愈的可能性太渺茫了。
　　因此，我们不能让这样的不幸就悄无声息地过去了。我要代表学生会，请求大家伸出援助之手。你的善良和解囊将使这个家庭摆脱困难。若要捐助，请拨：010—62605000。
6 R" p, b5 W4 p, _  C  g　　非常感谢！
3 L2 b5 F# L0 u, W2 Y% n5 I! W　　学生会仔细揣摩上面的文章，同学们不难发现，通过背诵新概念三册里的黄金句型，可以非常好地指导各位在四、六级的作文考试。所以，新概念英语的学习，务必要在专业老师的指导下，详细讲解新概念的每个句子的特点和使用方向，这样才能真正意义上学出新概念的精髓，看到这本世纪经典教材背后的美丽。