2012年12月大学英语四级写作技巧（3）4 J0 A. s0 ]+ \+ q% c4 I8 M8 ?& B
(并列谓语)
8 a5 q N4 ~7 x No: The mechanic explained the problem, method, and the tools that he was going to use. 2 b6 h. B6 Z. L: i
Yes: The mechanic explained the problem, method, and tools that he was going to use.
+ {5 b( q& Z/ @6 u) W- A (并列带有定冠词"the"的名词) 来自www.Examw.com3 e) x0 r3 }! g1 {) V
No: He retired respected by his associates, admired by his friends, and his employees loved him. ( Q* C9 y! k, H( y: z4 d& k
Yes: He retired respected by his associates, admired by his friends, and loved by his employees. 5 o9 }. J7 B$ Y2 ]& U
(并列被动语态) * y8 V) `. F. f! C& q/ e
No: As a young man he had been to Shanghai, fighting in the Anti-Japanese War, and following the Nationalist Party to Chongking. 4 Z* W5 [/ X: r w
Yes: As a young man he had been to Shanghai, had fought in the Anti-Japanese War and had followed the Nationalist Party to Chongking. |
发表于 2012-8-14 00:48:47
