大学英语六级范文欣赏：The children using mobile phones

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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled College Students on the Job Market. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.  
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　　3. 我的看法 考试用书
　　There is a growing tendency nowadays that children in mounting numbers own mobile phones. Does anyone hold the same attitude towards this phenomenon? Definitely not. Actually, opinions vary from person to person.
　　 Some emphasize the merits(优点) of children’s using mobile phones, they hold that children can contact with their parents or friends conveniently especially when they are confronted with （面对）difficulties or dangers. Moreover, mobile phones equipped with （装配有）various interesting games are also a convenient source of recreation and relaxation （娱乐和放松的来源）for children who have been under an enormous pressures from an overload of studies （承担过量学业的压力）. On the contrary, a majority of people hold that mobile phones are detrimental to （对…有害）children. For one thing, children’s being addicted to （孩子们对…的沉溺）mobile phones is nothing but a waste of their precious and limited time, which will definitely interfere with （影响）their studies. Additionally, radiation from mobile phone will exert a detrimental impact on （对…产生有害的影响）children’s body health.
　　From my perspective，it is not advisable that children should bring mobile phones. It is unbelievable that some students carry mobile phones just for the purpose of（目的）killing their precious time instead of keeping in touch with their parents regularly. The supposed helpful （本应该有利的）tool has become harmful. Accordingly, children should concentrate their time and energy on studies，those which might become distractions should not be introduced to them.