2012年12月大学英语六级作文写作技巧(26)

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2012年12月大学英语六级作文写作技巧(26)
/ S' ]3 ]& |- a综 合 改错（Errors Correction）：
　　一、语法错误
　　二、词汇错误
. n2 g* W0 T1 f7 l- \& _( ^　　三、逻辑错误
+ D8 R3 [" Y( o+ V( I　　四、多词少词
+ C. V, ~, @1 v' {- D6 H8 \　　Example:Television is rapidly becoming the literature
$ T1 q6 R- Z0 Z/ [7 ]7 Q　　of our periods. Many of the arguments 1.time/times/age
+ g3 d8 H  @8 H' G% f7 \　　having used for the study for literature as a 2. /
　　school subject are valid for ∧ study of television. 3. the
# h: t  `* ]& t* Q　　综 合 改 错（Errors Correction）：
- X  V1 C: K* T5 R2 S, n　　 语法错误
" R0 [& w, T* t) |, E+ F# P& B　　1、平行结构(not only...but also\both...and\either...or\and)
　　1) A professor’s salary is higher than a secretary.[secretary’s]
. C, n5 N: }) m; n8 d/ D1 e　　2) One of these is informative, interesting, and is easy to understand.[去掉]
9 y6 W% y7 s% m; i2 E　　3) Defining a problem is easier than to provide a solution.[providing]
# ^- E" Q5 V+ g+ g5 d) L3 k( b$ j　　2、连词错误
　　1) Candle will later be replaced by lamp, that could burn longer and lighter. [which]
- u3 U, ]4 r2 \　　2) The children attended a small elementary school (often of just one room) to that they had to walk every day, possibly for a few miles. [which，that前只能有except和in。except that除此以外；in that因为，体现在]
$ H, I( H: P0 E　　3) It will be interesting to discover how many young people go to universities without any idea of that they are going to do afterward. [what，what相当于the thing that]
　　4) It appears that we all find company in sound, if we demand a little quiet from time to time. [but或yet]
　　5) They are likely to travel more and to want more education. Nevertheless, many more jobs are available in these services. [Therefore或So]
　　3、分词错误
6 Z3 [1 a  P6 ^% h" I8 w　　1) Police’s records show a surprised link between changes in the seasons and crime patterns. [surprising]
' m3 e) d6 G! D/ T* O# q. g　　 2) Deciding how much discomfort and risk we are preparing to put up with in the name of better health is a high personal matter, not a decision we should remain to doctors alone.
　　3) Even the quiet of our careful protected wilderness areas can be invaded at any moment by a passed jet. [passing]
$ A2 K& c! X6 e: T3 m# I  d　　4) So a sportsman’s individual way of walking with raised shoulders is imitated by an admired fan. [admiring]
　　4、指代错误
6 H4 ?7 X- p- ^7 ~4 I# F　　1) A break in their employment, or a decision to work part time, will slow its raises and promotions-because it would for men. [their]
/ p7 R; e* Y4 t" P; h5 X　　2) Clearly some risks worth taking, especially when the rewards are high: a man surrounded by flames and smoke generally considers that jumping out of a second-floor window is an acceptable risk to save its life. [his] 转自:考试网 - [Examw.Com]
　　3) The modern light-house also identifies it in a code known to all ships. [itself]
　　5、形容词、副词（略）
　　6、谓语错误（主谓一致、时态、语态）
! j; i! d$ W/ j+ k3 [9 b2 m# ]　　1) Business today whether it is running a little gas-station or a big factory take good management.[takes]
3 g- C, Q, ~+ C  q  |( {/ ~$ f7 B　　2) Advances in technology has also changed people’s lives.
- A7 A& i% `- L8 M　　3) But if 98 percent of us doesn’t need to work, what are we going to do with ourselves? [don’t]
4 i! \9 Y' ^' t+ f　　4) Whether women who have started a career will attain pay equality with men rest on at least two factors. [rests]
9 G6 a$ P) ?/ j! K+ `　　5) In some places all the trees have cut down. [have been]