2011年大学英语六级改错模拟练习题14

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Unlike any earlier building complex anywhere in the world, Rocke-
: Z3 u1 V$ `/ B& R" {: r7 UFeller in New York City was built, not for a place where people could 1. _______
) a& S- W* \  m6 O- ylive in, but as a city in which they could work. It was one of the 2._______
smallest building projects of its kind, a city within city, and of the forerunner 3. ____
of projects that has sprung up all over the world. 30 architects, 120 draftsmen, 4. __
and hundreds of other artists and technicians are employed just to 5. ______
1 u, s! F' ]+ j8 S$ i) _draft the plan. Before the buildings could be erect, 229 old buildings had 6. _____
: }( |+ a# M# @4 w+ H' K! Uto be emptied of 4,000 tenants and razed. Just to buy up the leases took
# N" N0 i: O: q, O( X- o5 qover two years and cost over $6,000,000. The unusual shape and setbacks
of the 70-story RCA building resulted primary from practical considerations 7. ______
% M" B/ ?8 W5 z/ }  xsuch as lighting, the movement of people and the building’s services.
1 r* R& y; k; m. J, rThe lower concourse and basement level were set aside for shops. A
3 f( c. P9 B: V7 r; |5 jSunken plaza, complete with yards and fountains, were designed to provide 8. ____
access in these shops. Today the plaza, which is used for ice-skating 9. _____
: I/ Q, Y( z$ awinter and dining and dancing in summer,
is one of the center’s most popular attraction. 10. _________
# H9 K+ \; H$ L* N; I% M! f1．for -%26gt; as
介词误用。根据句意，此处意思是“作为”的意思，故用as。
2．去掉第一个in
句子结构混乱。此处定语从句的关系副词为where，证明从句缺地点状语；live后面如果使用in，那么从句就只却宾语，所以将in去掉。
3．smallest -%26gt; biggest
( l" W" r; `) a( v. y/ h4 N( c/ g逻辑错误。整篇文章讲的都是纽约城洛克菲勒地区的建设如何完善和巨大，因此它成为“城中城”，可见此处要说的是“它是同类型项目中最大的一个”，故将smallest改为biggest
5 F( \! t, k4 h7 g% y4．has -%26gt; have
2 s2 \- r# H+ Y7 {主谓不一致。定语从句的谓语动词应该和先行词保持一致，此处先行词为复数，所以谓语动词用have。
5．are -%26gt; were
+ f; L5 M, x3 U整篇文章的基本时态为一般过去时，此处依然将过去的事情，故将are改为were。
6．erect -%26gt; erected
此处是典型的被动语态，系动词后面要使用过去分词。
5 r& g1 P0 j# v2 z7．primary -%26gt; primarily
词性混淆。此处应该用副词修饰动词resulted。
8．were -%26gt; was
1 I$ W1 O9 y, l: W主谓不一致。本句的主语为A Sunken plaza，而complete with yards and fountains只是插入语，所以谓语动词要用单数。
+ X7 q9 W* z2 `0 K: g/ h9．in -%26gt; to
" }! i+ C$ Y( @8 ~! ]4 R+ g, S" ^此处access to 意为“通向…的入口”，与其相关的词组还有have access to（to为介词） ,意思为“有权利…，有机会做…” 。
6 f$ Q0 |4 s* P5 b( [  F3 D; j10．attraction -%26gt; attractions
, d1 n* E5 R4 v& P7 l. H名次单复数问题。前面有了one of，attraction又时可数名词，故使用复数