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[六级改错] 2012年大学英语六级改错提升练习一

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发表于 2012-8-14 10:46:58 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Prolonging human life has decreased the dependency load. In all societies ___1___
, d: B0 b. j; `7 `" u- d6 Mpeople are disable or too young or too old to work are dependent on the ___2___( E  E& g/ C% k# I3 p; S
rest of society to provide them. In hunting and gathering cultures old people ___3___0 k! N- ?4 `' I! t* ?$ w2 S
who could keep up might be left behind and die. In times of famine infants ___4___- F7 I" ?* D( X0 ?6 `# I( L
might be allowed to die because they could not survive when their parents 7 N) F' Q: h6 u0 |& B1 s& }3 A- p! g
starved; whereas when their parents survived they could have another child.
( s6 y) M' C/ n0 }. ~2 `8 e! t& MIn most contemporary societies people feel it a obligation to keep people , ?' x. E6 w1 R# x3 o9 G
live whether or not they can work. There are a great many people who live ___5___
9 D8 m8 Y% B$ M9 G9 g, C' V# g/ lthe past age in which they want to work or are able to work; there are rules ___6___$ T; l' I6 V) U3 K# o
that require people to retire at a certain age. If these people are able to save ___7___
, z2 C4 S# A! F! pmoney from their retirement, somebody else must support them. In the Unite , ?% a0 @; R* L* U' Y
states many people live on social security checks, which are so considerable ___8___
. L& o+ k& T# _) B" \8 ~that they must live in near poverty., d* z, [8 C1 x0 g1 s+ k+ |* V
Elder people are more liable to become ill than young or middle-aged people; ___9___+ A, ?. b0 A% ]  t5 s( _
therefore they are wealthy or provided with private or government insurance, ___10___
& y* \. |8 r) z( fthey must often “go on welfare” if they fall seriously ill.7 i# e( v' k. u6 z0 C* I
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答案及解析:
/ e# Z' w' k% ^3 J0 ^2 J4 f1. decreased -%26gt; increased
/ g- J/ w$ j, t根据下文提示,退休的老年人由工作的壮年人为其提供生活补助,可知此处地意思是“人类寿命的延长会增加社会负担”,所以此处应该用increased。 1 m0 X4 ]: h: \7 H2 v. U$ T! |

4 U1 g4 @+ G. z  p- V) c2. people后加who或that
9 ~2 d+ Y: z  V; v! t: t1 Z9 A0 Z分析句子结构,此句出现了两个谓语(系动词)are,故有一个必是从句。根据句子的主干可知,前部分are disable or too young or too old to work应该是定语从句,且缺少了引导词,又因为先行词是people,故加上相应的引导词that或who。
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' l# `8 {- p; X, d3. provide后加for* k. \9 d$ W% r$ y
此处从句的意思是“没有工作能力的人由有工作能力的人来养活”。provide for sb是“养活某人”的意思。
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) ], w1 ~" r4 |# T4. could后加not6 d, e, z+ m1 z
根据上下文理解,此处的意思应该是“老年人跟不上时代步伐,将被弃之不管或死去”。故要在could后加not。" ~  E" w5 M. y

/ t: F7 A. W: j! D5. live -%26gt; alive
: U  ^! |5 y+ z. q, l+ c( @3 `$ V这里是词组keep sb alive。' D! ^' i0 Y9 K5 y  s

" b$ [6 Z. T2 i5 p7 k+ Q! J6. in -%26gt; at
1 O- l+ Q# Z1 m5 B9 F3 p; _) n此处的意思是“今天还有很多人超过了能够工作的年龄…..”。定语从句的先行词是age,复原后的词组是at the age。故用at which。
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7. If -%26gt; Unless9 j# ^5 D0 e% o$ S0 M+ C
意思是“除非人们能位退休后的生活存钱,否则必须由别人来养活他们”。
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8. considerable -%26gt; little; c$ ]7 ^# I# H2 j% R, Q
根据上下文的理解,在美国,许多人靠社会救济生存,这笔钱很少,以至于人们生活在贫困的边缘。) _$ y5 g: J( V2 B8 q: [  V. l
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9. Elder -%26gt; Older! E; k6 N) t( m
elder意为“年龄较长的;资格老的,地位高的”,older意为“上年纪的”。此处指的是老年人,故用older。
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$ V  T5 _1 P& M3 r6 s10. therefore -%26gt; unless6 U) _9 X% p- _* X! c6 c
意思是“除非他们富有或有政府或私人的保险,否则生病时只能依靠救济金”。故将therefore改为unless。
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