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　　Elizabeth Blackwell was born in England in 1821, and emigrated from London to New York City when she　was ten year's old. One day, she decided that she wanted __1__ to be a doctor. That was nearly impossible for a woman　in the middle of the nineteenth century. Before writing __2__ many letters seeking an admission to medical school, she __3__ was finally accepted by a doctor in Philadelphia. Therefore __4__ determined she was that she taught in school and gave __5__ music lessons to earn money for her tuition.
: e  x, E. B, X, g, {  ]　　In 1849,until graduating from medical school, she decided __6__ to farther her education in Paris. She wanted to be a surgeon, __7__ but a serious eye infection forced her to abandon the idea.Upon returning to the US, she found difficult to start her __8__ own practice because she was a woman. By 1857 Elizabeth and her sister, also a doctor, managed to open a new hospital,the first for woman and children. Besides being the first __9__ female physician and found her own hospital, she also __10__ established the first medical school for women.
# A" D) j8 l+ R+ ^0 s' V8 r　　答案：
　　1. year's—years
　　2. Before—After.此处是讲述Elizabeth Blackwell写了许多信之后，最终被费城的一个医生所接受。
  H+ x4 e( J$ p+ h　　3. 删掉an.admission是不可数名词。
　　4. Therefore—So.此处隐藏着一个so...that...结构
( P1 U3 T& t2 u, }# K　　5. 删掉in.teach school为固定搭配，教书
　　6. until—after.据时间顺序，她是1849年从医学院毕业后决定去巴黎深造。
　　7. farther—further.farther只能做副词，further既可以做副词也可以做动词，此处就是further做动词，并带有宾语her education。
# k4 @* f2 _5 y. I　　8. 在difficult前加it.it做形式宾语，替代不定式to start her own practice。
　　9. woman—women.如果用一个人或东西说明整个类属的特点，有三种表示方式：在名词前加不定冠词；在名词前加定冠词；用名词的复数形式。此处就是使用名词的复数形式表示类属，women and children。
　　10. found—founding.与being一样作介词besides的宾语