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　　Three passions have governed my life: the longing for love, the search into knowledge, and the unbearable __1__ pity for the suffering of mankind.I have sought of love, first, because it brings ecstasy--ecstasy so great because I would often have __2__ sacrificed all the rest of my life for a few hours for this joy. I have sought it, next, because it relieves loneliness--that terrible loneliness which one shivering consciousness __3__ looks over the rim of the world into the cold unfathomable　lifeless abyss. I have sought it, then, because in the __4__ union of love I have seen, in a mystic miniature, the　prefiguring vision of the heaven where saints and poets __5__ have imagined. This is what I sought, and though it might　seem too good for human life, this is what--at last--i have found.With equal passionate I have sought knowledge. I have wished __6__ to understand the hearts of men. I have wished to know whythe stars shine...A little this, but not much, I have achieved. __7__ Love and knowledge, so far as they were possible,led upward toward the heavens. But it always pity brought __8__ me back to earth. Echoes of cries of pain reverberate inmy heart. Children in famine, victims tortured by oppressors,helpless old people--a hated burden to their sons, and the whole world of loneliness, poverty and pain make a mock of what __9__ human life should be. I long to alleviate the evil, but I cannot,and I too suffer. This has been my life. I have found it　worth of living, and would gladly live it again if the chance __10__ were offered me.
　　答案：
　　1.into-for．search into意思是“调查”，这里要表示“寻找”，应该用词组search for。
　　2.because-that．原句意思是：我追寻过爱，首先是因为他带来狂喜——莫大的狂喜，我常会为了几个小时的这种喜悦吧我的余生都牺牲掉。“so...that”句型表示因果关系。
　　3.^which-in．这句的意思是：我追寻过爱，再者是因为它能排遣寂寞——陷入那种可怕的寂寞，一颗颤抖的心灵在世界的边缘之上俯瞰冰冷，深不见底、毫无生息的深渊。which做关系代词引导从句修饰loneliness，同时定语从句本身主谓语结构完整，因此应在which前面加上in，表示“在这种寂寞中”，做状语。
　　4.then-finally/lastly．前文已经出现了表示列举的first、next，此句之后也没有再列举其他理由，所以此处应该表示列举最后一条原因，应为finally或者lastly。
, ]  P* f, t/ k8 d$ \3 ^　　5.where-that/which．此处heaven是先行词，后边的定语从句只缺少宾语，不能用关系副词where，应该用关系代词that或者which。
　　6.passionate-passion．with是介词，后面应跟名词，而passionate是形容词，故改为passion。