语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中,语法错误,尤其是较为严重的错误,是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”,有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的,大家可以设想一下,一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分,那将得不偿失。因此,认清各种各样的语法错误,尽可能地避免少犯,对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将我们在阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类,抽出其中的典型错误,以警示大家,供参考。
" d4 X! D) e: Z/ ^ 1.句子成分残缺不全
% j+ h K0 z4 _ R, x$ _- H we always working till late at night before taking exams.(误)% l! {$ H% X" t2 q7 k9 Y
we are always working /we always work till late at night before taking exams(正)
4 X+ O& T4 ?* h we should read books may be useful to us. (误)6 _0 g! M+ Z6 u U$ z
we should read books which may be useful to us. (正)
9 q2 v4 b( x3 E/ k- e" e n5 ~ 2.句子成分多余
5 j0 r& V( N' S4 b this test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误)7 }+ x7 @! F' i3 m" `
one test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)6 o1 e* l0 g9 b2 L
the driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误)" Z# a! C7 ~9 `) \. ]6 o$ G5 S
the driver of the red car died on the spot. (正)
, c3 |) l5 [) S y8 ~ 3.主谓不一致
% _9 X3 t& n# E4 a# p# ~) o someone/somebody think that reading should be selective. (误)
2 V* P6 M1 ~$ E( k& J some think that reading should be selective. (正)* x( Q. s* c! Y$ y/ V7 z
my sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误)# a) m$ K8 ~( V9 D u5 [
my sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正)
+ [; P% {% y$ [ 4.动词时态、语态的误用
& t b2 R) D0 Q4 b- T' \ i was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)
" {, R y% @1 m' R, i i was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)
, j8 x, C5 x$ ^0 \& T* Z Y1 f" ^ we have little time to read some books which we interest. (误)% L* G1 ]: X6 x' K
we have little time to read some books in which we are interested. (正)
5 E& t3 ^% S: k# h, V i am a student who has studying in the college for two years. (误)8 i8 n5 U% Y% `% r' a9 `1 G4 q
i have been studying in the college for two years(正)2 C! s% l9 C5 E& m* W# u
5.词类混淆
2 l+ Q) m% C R, t/ |6 B/ o, m g it is my point that reading must be selectively. (误)
3 ?! q; |, t+ S4 r7 l in my opinion, reading must be selective. (正)
' q' w0 K3 a | honest is so important for everyperson. (误)! @' J% f. W( q
honesty is so important for everyone. (正)2 C' w- b7 e; k
the old man was hit by a car when he across the street. (误)
# f" K2 A8 u- U the old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. (正) |