About half of the infant and maternal deaths in developing countries could be avoided if women had used family planning methods to prevent high risk ____1____pregnancies, according to a report publishing recently by the Johns Hopking ____2____University. Y0 R3 e* o1 g9 ^" d0 j
The report indicates that 5.6 million infant deaths and 2,000,000 maternal
7 l/ J) W: J- t% a Deaths could be prevented this year if women chose to have theirs children ____3____within the safest years with adequate intervals among births and limited their ____4____families to moderate size.6 K4 P$ J$ H4 \& f n. R0 P
This amounts to about half of the 9.8 million infant and 370.000 maternal deaths in developing countries, excluded China, estimated for this year by ____5____the United Nation’s Children’s Fund and the US Centers for Disease Control respectably. China was excluded because very few births occur in the high ____6____risk categories.
. L7 z/ \$ c" t" F* n* W/ J6 W The report says that evidences from around the world shows the risk of ____7____maternal or infant ill and death is the highest in four specific types of ____8_____pregnancy; pregnancies before the mother is 18 year old; those after the ____9____mother is 35 years old; pregnancies after four births; and those lesser than ____10____two years apart.
& M' c; M% R/ Y1 b 答案:1 将had used 改为 used。* a- s+ B; F, V" @( Q4 n7 R/ f0 l
因为此句是虚拟语气,表示与现在事实相反,故条件从句中应使用一般过去时。例如:6 p8 I0 e _, g: B
Many would be wise if they did not think themselves wise. 许多人原本会成为聪明人-如果他们不自以为聪明的话。
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report和publish时逻辑动宾关系,故应使用publish的过去分词短语来修饰report。例如:
7 R" O- B6 F9 s Any discovery that we may make, however small, will remain acquired knowledge. 任何可能的发现,不管多么微不足道,都将成为知识宝库中的一部分。
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4 将among改为between! Q! Q3 y% `9 a$ | {+ u0 P: _' @
在两次怀孕期间留出足够的间隔时间,故用between。
9 z5 K0 b4 g1 E 5 将过去分词excluded改为介词excluding。: k3 G, r* d/ e; `& P. q. Y2 Z
excluding意为“不包括…”7 O, i1 Z$ L4 e+ Z
6 将respectably改为respectively$ _# S2 n2 Y: C, C5 U4 Q: G
respectively 意为 “分别地 ”,符合句子的意思。而respectably意为 “可敬的,值得尊敬地 ”。, ~. ~8 j8 W) M1 ?
7将evidences改为evidence。
1 ?% Q0 w: Z4 r( c5 C evidence是不可数名词。
4 W) T; y8 d4 u0 B+ R% u 8将ill改为illness。: {8 ?3 J( r* J, M
9将year改为years。8 ~- y: A" T9 I2 J% b9 Y
10将lesser改为less |