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[BEC中级] 写作指导:2011年商务英语考试写作讲议第一讲(2)

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发表于 2012-8-14 19:56:54 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  商务书信类
+ O& s% P: O+ m$ J& {) _  这一题型要求考生根据所提供的短文,如书信、传真、便函、留言条(电话留言条)等,起草一封书信,字数要求达到120—140词左右。
+ U8 [& r  T4 U# K0 U  题目结构:$ X& Z/ [9 c1 p1 F& s3 ~+ k
  Input: 1 situation description  O' w- D  B% m/ ?  y
     2 task2 U( ~. M4 K! B4 o
     3 target reader/ ^1 }* M. u- ^9 C# S9 l
  Reading: texts in note, letter, fax, memo + content points (handwritten notes; second letter)
6 u$ g4 c- o4 Y1 \3 k  Write: business letter (120-140 words)# T$ j9 k5 z/ o' ?4 X% B
  注意英美拼写问题
' b/ C4 r9 ?6 ?' Q7 |  【例题】
2 C; H4 z" ~4 n  a+ D8 l& M8 ?! F  You have organised a production conference for your company which will be held on 10 October 2005. The following is the letter of confirmation you received from the Conference Centre.
( Z3 a7 p8 ?0 P  Read the letter and fax below, which gives details of the conference.% J! u! J  b- ?: C" J, I4 P  N
  Then, using all information from the fax, write your letter to John Smith at the Nuffield Conference Centre, explaining the changes to the arrangements.
; J$ T2 x; A7 F  w  q* S$ [  Do not include postal addresses.4 _: K( l' _4 _5 i
  Write 120-140 words on separate sheet.
3 E# R$ ^* x8 p8 }. u, rDear Conference Organiser," X: w7 B4 u6 n, b
I am writing to confirm the arrangements for the conference.
* \+ @- `6 X, n% X  sDATE AND TIME:              10th October-10 a.m. to 5 p.m.8 v8 O& |  e6 d5 B! m
NUMBER OF GUESTS:          50
! Q4 S- Q6 t! @% YROOMS RESERVED            10 a. m. to 12: 30 p.m.
0 n" c' f& y( L9 |2 C7 f0 ?/ S6 n' VCONFERENCE HALL 3; y+ A/ B  h4 ~4 `. _
2 p.m. to 5 p.m.
$ \  [+ u% P9 i& [: K8 ISEMINAR ROOMS 1, 2, and 31 S8 L$ P3 E. _
CATERING:                   Coffee--11 a.m. to 11:30 a.m.% R! U2 a( Z- p
Lunch-12:30p.m. to 2p.m.
% n" y9 d5 d; c, `Conference Centre Restaurant
/ n1 W1 z1 s2 D# O( s2 lTea-4 p.m.
  N; R' L& C8 ?9 k8 ?0 GWe look forward to welcoming your company to the Nuffield Conference Centre.
8 m% b2 a% `4 y3 pYours faithfully,! l2 R2 c. A+ x
John Smith
$ u# I, k0 M4 @/ @  Today your Production Manager has sent you the fax below with changes he would like to make to the conference arrangements
9 M1 \- v6 x' W7 b8 f3 `, G  VFAX                                                                    
2 [% R4 v0 i# e! T. [, [2 qI’m afraid we have to make some last-minute changes to the arrangements for our production conference.) t+ t" M1 d) Z2 E# }+ r$ n, C
Ten more guests have accepted. The President wants only one hour for lunch, and just a simple buffet-not seated in the restaurant. The Conference Speaker(Tom Moors)can’t come until 2 pm. So he will give his presentation in the afternoon. Can we move the seminars to the morning?
9 p& j  s+ C$ l6 ~6 m5 G" XSorry about this!* W  [9 `: D+ S: E5 N
Sam* O+ d% l  O: L8 y) ~
  注意:
) f1 b# f6 Y5 r  1 不要跑题6 I2 r9 U, B" Z) E
  2 适当发挥
" ?4 U7 |0 L0 [2 n8 |; I  3 目标读者8 U# C$ H! h$ z: a" I) W
  4 不要抄袭7 }; R5 t1 B" w& }# a; I
  三种对策:
* r6 {% B7 G  b, W( n  a 换句型4 R$ g# t, i# K
  e.g. This rule applies in every case.$ G; b3 e6 u% E( v
  There are no exceptions to the rule. (肯定句变否定句); z" f! q. L8 U1 V9 i" ^1 p
  b 换同义词
% L6 c! H5 A! k: g  e.g. The arguments put forward by these two authors are nearly the same.
# c4 f9 R; q& j. {. {$ R. y: Y8 ~  The views expressed by the two writers are almost identical.
  E7 z5 h, H. v2 ?) D" u  c 改词性5 E! g: w7 n$ k5 E8 g
  e.g. The English language has had a major impact on developing other world languages.4 ?' z7 e: \2 }% [" @
  Other world languages have been greatly affected by the English language in their developments.
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