商务英语(BEC)考试初级写作模拟题讲解(三)

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　题目：　　Read this text about a Japanese company.
　　. In most of the lines (36-40) there is one extra word which does not fit in. One or two line, however, are correct.
　　. If the line is correct,put a tick (√)in the space on your Answer Sheet.
　　. If there is an extra word in the line, write that word in the space on your Answer Sheet.
6 n4 z( M$ a, m% n! k! z　　Example :
　　For short distance, it uses its own’ self airplanes. For international ......self......
　　flights it calls on leading airlines including the Japanese Airlines. ...... ...... √...... . ......
) b" ]6 O. K( K+ l3 |9 @9 _　　LUFTHANSE, WELCOME ON ABOARD
　　It’s only normal that a service-oriented company should look to other
1 O# y0 @2 k; m$ \8 L　　36. service companies as partners. The reputation for excellence of every each
　　37. of DHL’s partners strongly motivated its choice. To make that sure that
: X* r' q' v& _/ k. @' N# h4 W　　38. everyone made the right choice,they agreed to give their final answer
　　39. after a two-year old trial period. Faster service,better airport
. q/ A6 T6 R1 \; E) a! `　　40. facilities; the benefits to the customers are clear. They will also grow up
; a- h. k- C2 G　　in the near future,allowing customers to choose from so many services.
6 Z. i9 S' R# L3 R　　section B
, H- {% w# s- y0 G% r　　Questions 41-45
  Y0 N( W5 S; e  z; p　　. A student has translated a piece of news in a Chinese newspaper back into English and asked you to check it.
　　. In each line there is one wrong word.
　　. For each numbered line (41-45) write the correct word in the space on your Answer Sheet.
! m: a& y: w2 Q7 F6 H" C　　Example:
1 f7 d0 l+ \+ ~　　They have selled their products in 20 countries. ...... ......sold ...... ......
　　British farmers are troubled by straw. They produce more than
　　41. ten millions tons every year as a byproduct of farming and
　　42. their animals need only four million tons for bedding and fooding.
　　43. Since European air-pollution laws forbid people to burnt straw,
2 d6 D- [9 m7 M& g　　44. the extra straw is plowed under or leave to rot. Scientists have
! v& f2 O, t& t5 T$ Y9 `( {　　45. now found a way to put the straw to good using by changing a neat-loving bacterium in the straw.
　　参考答案
　　36. every是多余,应删掉. each of 每一个，是固定搭配。
　　37. that是多余,应删掉. make sure确保，也是固定搭配。
　　38. 没有多余的词.
　　39. 没有多余的词.
　　40. up是多余,应删掉. grow就表示增长的意思，grow up成了长大的意思了。
5 W( ~6 _2 k/ i' k　　Section B
　　41. millions应改为million million的用法，具体的几百万后面不用加s，如果是数百万，用millions of.
　　42. fooding应改为food.food本身就表示食物的意思，一般提供食物直接用food就可以。
　　43. burnt应改为burn forbid to do sth,to后直接用动词原形。
# G0 a% B6 f" ]6 p+ P" {　　44. leaving应改为left.这一句是被动语态的，is后面要用过去分词表示被动，而且leave和plowed是并列的两个动作，由此也看出应该用left.
5 M/ q, l$ @* a+ f6 g6 r+ i　　45. using 应改为use.make good use of sth.做用途讲时直接用use，也有名词的意思。