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[BEC初级] 商务书信写作的十大注意事项

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发表于 2012-8-14 20:05:42 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
商业信函有其自身的特点。下面是商务书信写作中的几点注意事项,小心不要在你自己的工作中出现这样的错误哦!; b) r! E& |' Y& a9 Q4 J6 t
1.切忌主客不分或模糊。例子: Deciding to rescind the earlier estimate, our report was updated to include $40,000 for new equipment.应改为 Deciding to rescind our earlier estimate, we have updated our report to include $40,000 for new equipment. (We决定呀, 不是report.)
4 ?' i. d0 A, z' y* M2.句子不要零碎。 例子: He decided not to audit the last ten contracts. Because of our previous objections about compliance. 两个句子应该连在一起:He decided not to audit the last ten contracts because of our previous objections about compliance.
. G9 M- h# T/ M# w# r& w) D1 F6 Z3.结构对称,令人容易理解。例子: The owner questioned the occupant's lease intentions and the fact that the contract had been altered with ink markings. 应改为: The owner questioned the occupant's lease intentions and ink alterations of the contract.
2 s% W; y' j; E# i4.单复数不要搞乱,不然会好刺眼,看着不舒服。例如: An authorized person must show that they have security clearance. 应改为 Authorized persons must show that they have security clearance.% W; f5 [$ ]' U% Q3 i# z
5.动词和主语要呼应。想想这两个句子的分别: 1. This is one of the public-relations functions that is under-budgeted. 2. This is one of the public-relations functions, which are under-budgeted.; w/ F$ d$ l# ]: v
6.时态和语气不要转换太多。看商务英语已经是苦事,不要浪费人家的精力啊。
/ N) m; k" Z( G# E7.标点要准确。例如: He did not make repairs, however, he continued to monitor the equipment. 应改为: He did not make repairs; however, he continued to monitor the equipment.+ Z  G6 ^( y& k
8.选词正确。像affect和effect,operative和operational等等就要弄清楚才好用啦。
3 }3 }! `4 i7 `" {9.拼字正确。有电脑拼字检查功能后,就更加不能偷懒。4 t  M  ^5 T" z1 ]* g1 U
10.大小写要注意。除非必要不要整个词都大写,除非要骂人。例如: MUST change to OS immediately. 外国人就觉得不礼貌和喝令人一样。要强调的话,用底线,斜字,粗体就可以了。
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