托福写作:寻找托福写作分数低的原因(5) 7 a8 [5 u4 n" M {/ { 不间断句子(Run-on Sentences) 9 @9 g' G; [4 {$ {! r6 K 什么叫run-on sentence?请看下面的例句。中华考试网! F4 Q" r: Q% F* q7 Z
例1. There are many ways we get to know the outside world。( \# X v9 M1 E9 J D
剖析:这个句子包含了两层完整的意思:“There are many ways。” 以及“We get to know the outside world。”。简单地把它们连在一起就不妥当了。. q5 V3 }! b2 `. o
改为: . I7 u# k8 |8 E, `% `1 h2 O3 { There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world. 或: 6 C& k1 J& A) l8 T2 J" V2 b! c, A There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world。 2 B8 ^( ~$ W8 D" Y( O 以上托福写作几种情况,在大家有目共睹的情况下诞生了,不知你是否犯过同样低级的托福写作错误呢,为了跟上我们21世纪,我们还是走上高级的人生,避免哪些低级error吧。