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[托福写作] 历年托福考生优秀范文155篇一百零八

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发表于 2012-8-14 23:46:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
With the development of human society, people are living longer now. Many factors interacting together to enable the longer life. There are three most important causes: the quality of food has been greatly improved; people could have medical services; more and more people realize that regular sports benefit their health.  
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( h! V/ k2 x7 q% @/ LThe improving quality of our food is the most important factor of the longer life. We could have  . D5 k, V0 P2 T" h5 p0 r
not only enough food as we want, but also the healthier food. When we preparing food, we no  
/ a! |( E4 A( l( z# v/ T: s7 ^5 M5 llonger consider the cost, but pay more attention to the nutritions of the food. With the  
5 D( q6 s6 e! ddevelopment of transportation systems, inland people now could also enjoy seafood and tropical  ' X$ }" {0 R# _3 \- @7 R
fruit.  
9 |3 [1 b: H" bFurthermore, governments are paying more and more money on medical establishments. Citizens could have medical services more easily. Because of the convenient medical service more  
  e6 J7 J& o# x1 C$ N. G8 Hillnesses could be detected at an earlier stage. Also, many illnesses that had been considered fatal could be cured today. The better detection and curement enable people’s longer life.  
. }1 `/ H" G  N, ILast but not least important is that people care more for their own health. Every morning you could see people doing sports outside. More and more people have realized the saying "life is  
, Y: A" [$ w/ q, B( a$ t0 zlocomotion". Regular sports build up a strong body. Naturally, people with stronger body could resist more deseases.  
. P( o- E: r4 C$ bTo sum up, the development of our society causes the longer life of people. People have better food and better medical services. And people spend more time on sports to biuld up stronger bodies. As we could predict, people are going to live even longer.
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