历年GRE考试Issue主题范文及评析06
This statement is stating. The more advance in tecnology that society becomes, the more we depend on technology to live our everyday lives.Society as a whole will out do daily tasks and depend more on machines and computers to accomplish those tasks for them. For example; I was told that the younger generations use caclators in classes on a everday level. We counld'nt do that. We had to resolve a problem on our own. Because caculators are being used, mathproblems are being adjusted around the caculators. If I didnt know how to use a caculator today then I most likely woulnd't know how to attempt to tackle the math of today.Computers of todayare another example. Writing a essay took a lot of thought and hard workin past. Today, I can type some words in the computer and that computer will spell, make grammer correction, and dictate a right form to use in my essay. In the past we had to all these things on our own. I'm not putting down modern technology totally. I just want to state that if we take away people's ability to think then we will slowly loose our ability to function with out modern technology. www.Examw.com 评价This response is fundamentally deficient because it does not discuss the issue.Instead, it briefly discusses the drawbacks of specific types of technology (e.g., calculators and computers) in terms of the effect they have on an individual's ability to function without them.
Furthermore, the essay lacks control of the basic elements of academic writing.Awkward and imprecise phrasing often interferes with meaning (e.g., "Society as a whole will out do daily tasks???").
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