会计考友 发表于 2012-8-14 11:29:10

英语专业八级改错练习题及答案解析(三十一)

  Eye behavior can give subtle messages which
  people pick up in their daily life. It tells more than
  words can. Meeting or failing to meet another person's
  eyes produce a particular effect.When two Americans __1__
  look searchingly at each other's eye, emotions are __2__
  heightened and the relationship becomes closer. How-
  ever, Americans are careful about where and when to __3__
  meet other's eye. In our normal conversation, each
  eye-contract lasts only a few seconds before one or
  both individuals look away, because the longer meeting
  of the eyes is rare, and, after it happens, can generate __4__
  a special kind of human-to-human awareness. For instance,
  by simple using his eyes, a man can make a woman aware
  of him comfortably or uncomfortably; a long and steady
  gaze from a policeman or judge intimidates accused. __5__
  In the U.S., proper street behavior requires a nice
  balance of attention and inattention. You are supposed
  to look at a passer-by just enough to show that you
  are being aware of his presence. If you look too little, __6__
  you appear haughty; too much, inquisitive. Much eye
  behavior is such subtle that our reaction to it is __7__
  largely instinctive. Besides, the codes of eye behavior
  vary dramatically from one culture to other. In the __8__
  Middle East, it is impolite to look at the other person
  all the time during a conversation; in England, the
  polite listener fixes the speaker with an inattentive __9__
  stare and blinks eye occasionally as a sign of interest
  and attention. In America, eye behavior functions as
  a kind of conversational traffic signal control the __10__
  talking pace and time, and to indicate a change of topic.

会计考友 发表于 2012-8-14 11:29:11

英语专业八级改错练习题及答案解析(三十一)

  参考答案及解析:
  1.把produce改为produces
  本句中两个主语meeting和failing to meet another person's eye 用or连接,这时谓语动词应该采取就近原则,与最相邻的主语一致。
  2.把at改为into
  此处的动作应该是look into(注视),而不是一般的“看”(look at)。
  3.把where改为how
  上下文介绍的是目光交流的方式方法。
  4.把after改为when/if
  5.在accused前面加上the
  intimidate(胁迫)是一个及物动词,后面不能只接形容词,此处应该加上定冠词,与accused构成名词短语,表示一类人,即“被告”。本句的意思是:
  例如,只要运用目光,男人就可以让女人很自在或者不舒服地感觉到他的存在;而警察或法官的长时间的注视可以威吓被告。
  6.删除being
  7.把such改为so
  8.把other改为another
  表示不定指代的“一个或者另一个”应该用one and/or another。
  9.把inattentive改为attentive
  10.在control前面加上to
  control the talking pace and time 应该和to indicate a change of topic并列,作为conversational traffic signal 的定语,也要用动词不定式。
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