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英语专业八级改错练习题及答案解析(五十三)

  Whether the eyes are "the windows of the soul" is debatable;
  they are intensely important in interpersonal communication is a __1__
  fact. During the first two months of a baby's life, the stimuli that __2__
  produces a smile is a pair of eyes. The eyes need not to be real: a __3__
  mask with two dots will produce a smile. Significantly, a real human
  face with eyes covered will not motivate a smile, or will the sight of __4__
  only one eye when the face is presented on profile. This attraction to __5__
  eyes opposed to the nose or mouth continues as the baby matures. __6__
  In one study, when American four-year-old were asked to draw __7__
  people, 75 percent of them drew people with mouths, and 99 percent __8__
  of them drew people with eyes. In Japan, furthermore, where babies __9__
  are carried on their mother's back, infants do not acquire as much
  attachment to eyes like they do in other cultures. As a result, __10__
  Japanese adults make little use of the face either to encode or decode
  meaning.
  答案及解析:
  1.^they-that
  分句后的分句应有它独立的主谓结构,正像它前面的结构一样。而后半句的谓语是is,表语是fact,主语似乎是缺失的,因此在they前面加上that就构成了主语从句作为这半句的主语。
  2.stimuli-stimulus
  stimuli看似单数实则是stimulus的复数形式,因此应改为stimulus。
  3.to-/
  这里的need作情态动词,因此删去to。
  4.or-nor
  并列的否定,用否定形式nor表示倒装。
  5.on-in
  in profile表示 “侧面,从侧面”。如:
  The painting shows her in profile。
  6.^opposed-as
  opposed前应使用连词as引导比较分句。
  7.old-olds
  由谓语的复数形式可以看出这里需要用复数形式four-year-olds。
  8.and-but
  9.furthermore-however
  上一句话指明美国文化中眼睛的重要性,而这一句话似乎指出日本文化中眼睛并不具有同样的重要性,因此两句话的关系是转折而不是递进。
  10.like-as
  句子中有一个as……as比较结构。
 
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