英语写作精讲精练：一个公式三个原则（2）
示例2：I entered the room saw mother sit there wait for me come back.分析：这里有5个动词，都没有标记逻辑关系，错误！通过分析，我们看到：entered和saw可以并列，因为它们拥有共同的1(I)；sit和wait可以并列，因为它们拥有共同的1(mother)，但这两组动词之间就不能再并列了，因为无法这么做。这就意味着：这句话里的动词有的可以并列，而有的不可以。
示例3：I opened the bag took out some paper and a pen, sat down started take notes.
分析：opened，took out，sat down，started这四个动词拥有共同的1(I)，而且都是1直接行使或发出的动作，所以，可以采取并列关系；但take因为有个过渡层，因此并列处理不合适。
2.从属关系示例
示例1：I sat down beside her said nothing.
分析：动词关系混乱，假如想确保said，则需要牺牲后面，如：
I sat down beside her, saying nothing.
假如确保后面，则牺牲前面：
Sitting down beside her, I said nothing.
示例2：To quit smoking, I eat candies.
一个句子一个句号原则
理论上讲，一个句子一个句号，但是，实际中会有几个甚至多个句子摆放在一起共享一个句号。此时应该怎么办呢？
答案很简单：标记清楚这些句子间的逻辑关系。有两种：
1.并列关系示例
示例1：I sat down beside her. I said nothing.
变为：I sat down beside her and I said nothing.
示例2：He asked me a question. I answered him.
变为：He asked me a question and I answered him.
2.从属关系
1)运用各类从句，形成主从符合句，包括：
状语从句
宾语从句
定语从句
主语从句
同位语从句
2)运用非谓语动词类进行从属方式的处理，包括：
动词的ing形式
动词的过去分词形式
动词不定式形式
从属关系示例(以状语从句为例)
示例1：When he asked me a question, I answered him.
示例2：I was so angry that I beat him up!
示例3：If you ask me ‘why’, I will answer ‘because’!
示例4：Since you are not feeling well, just lie down and take a good rest.
示例5：Although I have tried my best, I can’t win her heart.
示例6：Wherever I am, I will be thinking of you.
示例7：I went out very early in the morning so that I could avoid the rush hour traffic
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