大家来找错之大学专业八级的改错练习24
Planning is a very important activity in our lives. It can give pleasure, even excitement, and it can cause quite severe headaches. __1__ The most significant the task ahead, the more careful the planning __2__ required. Getting to school or to work on time is a task requiring few __3__ or no planning, it is almost routine. A month’s touring holiday abroad,or better still, getting married, is a different matter altogether. If the matter involve a church wedding, a reception, a honeymoon in Venice, __4__ and returning a new home, this requires even more planning to make __5__ sure that it is successful. Planning is our way of trying to ensure success and of avoiding costly failures we can not suffer. It is equally essential __6__ to individual nations and families; the scale may be vary, but the degree __7__ of importance does not. In the essence, a nation planning its resources __8__ and needs do not differ from the familiar weekly shopping or monthly __9__ household budget. Both are designed to ensure an adequate supply of essentials, and if improperly carried out, will avoid shortages, wastage __10__ and over-expenditure.答案:
1 将and 改为 or。or表示“或者”,因为前后是两种截然不同的可能性,所以应该用or。
2 将most改为 more
3 将few改为little
4 将involve 改为 involves。因为主语 the matter 为单数,例如:Although planning involves material investment, even more important is the investment in man.虽然作机会应该包括物资投资,但最重要的是对人的投资。
5 在returning后加介词to
6 将suffer改为afford
7 去掉be。vary是动词,可与助动词或者情态动词构成谓语,也可以独立构成谓语,例如:The weather varies from hour to hour in some mountain districts.
8 去掉the。in essence 是固定习语,意为“本质上,实质的“
9 将do改为 does。主语是动名词复合结构 a nation planning its resources and needs, 应视为单数,例如:Looking after children requires patience.
10 将improperly改为 properly
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