Planning is a very important activity in our lives. It can give pleasure, even excitement, and it can cause quite severe headaches. __1__ The most significant the task ahead, the more careful the planning __2__ required. Getting to school or to work on time is a task requiring few __3__ or no planning, it is almost routine. A month’s touring holiday abroad,or better still, getting married, is a different matter altogether. If the matter involve a church wedding, a reception, a honeymoon in Venice, __4__ and returning a new home, this requires even more planning to make __5__ sure that it is successful. Planning is our way of trying to ensure success and of avoiding costly failures we can not suffer. It is equally essential __6__ to individual nations and families; the scale may be vary, but the degree __7__ of importance does not. In the essence, a nation planning its resources __8__ and needs do not differ from the familiar weekly shopping or monthly __9__ household budget. Both are designed to ensure an adequate supply of essentials, and if improperly carried out, will avoid shortages, wastage __10__ and over-expenditure.$ T" K+ Q; j* o) k r% }) l
答案：
- b7 C& e( {: _) R- W 1 将and 改为 or。or表示“或者”，因为前后是两种截然不同的可能性，所以应该用or。
/ u; R8 _8 }8 W m0 ]8 I; n 2 将most改为 more* p: S% ^- T) C8 i; g
3 将few改为little
- h2 i* x9 \8 L 4 将involve 改为 involves。因为主语 the matter 为单数，例如：Although planning involves material investment, even more important is the investment in man.虽然作机会应该包括物资投资，但最重要的是对人的投资。% C) j( ]+ `1 v0 y& D
5 在returning后加介词to
2 h$ m0 G5 _/ k5 |' Y 6 将suffer改为afford
+ w7 J* L; Q& N5 j- x 7 去掉be。vary是动词，可与助动词或者情态动词构成谓语，也可以独立构成谓语，例如：The weather varies from hour to hour in some mountain districts.
2 V0 D7 K9 j! R& G+ |3 ^1 J 8 去掉the。in essence 是固定习语，意为“本质上，实质的“
) d$ R. D0 K' A M" [7 } 9 将do改为 does。主语是动名词复合结构 a nation planning its resources and needs, 应视为单数，例如：Looking after children requires patience.
' R( p5 r# c V, {2 n% m5 B, u 10 将improperly改为 properly |
发表于 2012-8-14 11:29:10
