会计考友 发表于 2012-8-14 23:46:10

托福考试辅导:写作易犯错误示例解析—表意重复

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  They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.
  前面已经提到了朋友,后面又提到朋友。
  The show is so compelling but attractive.
  compelling和attractive是同义词,所以这里这么写就让人不明白。
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