托福考试辅导：写作易犯错误示例解析—表意重复

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　　表意重复
; j0 a# o' q6 h% C/ o( ^* L　　They shocked their friends, devastated their families, crushed their best friends.
* q6 l8 v3 w$ A3 [% s　　前面已经提到了朋友，后面又提到朋友。
　　The show is so compelling but attractive.
& m1 Z) @2 y2 T　　compelling和attractive是同义词，所以这里这么写就让人不明白。