2012年12月大学英语四级写作技巧指导(10)
0 o! x+ i0 i2 Q7 A( e% U2 N- R3 V含性别色彩的语句
2 b3 J) X$ @0 \ NO: A newspaper reporter is always mindful of his deadline.
4 l8 w7 p* v( H! G% m: m YES: A newspaper reporter is always mindful of the deadline.
% ]& H; `1 e: d, ?3 C 或Newspaper reporters are always mindful of their deadlines. 考试用书
8 x# s3 s7 S$ }7 _9 S NO: A pilot should offer his advice during an emergency. 4 d) D, G: I/ e1 K5 K5 w4 @
YES: A pilot should offer advice during an emergency. " Z6 R2 K2 K$ A
或Pilots should offer their advice during an emergency. " n# a! O3 K& m: i, Z6 ~8 ^6 p
或A pilot should offer his or her advice during an emergency.
8 P+ I$ H1 L7 P. G+ h% h2 q NO: When a customer calls, be sure to ask him to leave his phone number.
& p! J( k/ ~" Q$ [7 W+ k When a customer calls, be sure to ask him or her to leave his or her phone number.
. R* D1 _6 i: o0 l YES: When a customer calls, be sure to ask for a phone number.
D6 ~& a$ R1 v 或When customers call, be sure to ask for their phone numbers. 4 M; W: S R1 A: }
NO: Would the guests and their wives please be seated?
- l2 r( l0 A* o YES: Would the guests and spouses please be seated? 2 `: I6 I2 d) _( r. X0 q
NO: I talked to your woman service representative named Linda early this morning. ! [$ \( J* V' n1 P
YES: I talked to Linda, your service representative, early this morning.
" N" C: A3 \; z9 M/ m9 | NO: "Dear Mr. Porter and Caroline: How are you?"
, g2 L2 v& P7 c YES: "Dear Mr. Porter and Ms. Davis: How are you?" |
发表于 2012-8-14 00:48:47
