2012年12月大学英语四级写作技巧指导(10)
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8 I* x4 N$ B% a, }! a: A+ c NO: A newspaper reporter is always mindful of his deadline.
7 J; J% u7 s$ b3 ~: k( ? YES: A newspaper reporter is always mindful of the deadline.
& j7 Z9 c/ N# e; |( Q ] 或Newspaper reporters are always mindful of their deadlines. 考试用书* o5 |9 M5 O4 Q3 Q1 f
NO: A pilot should offer his advice during an emergency. & P4 a: `9 A# G0 n
YES: A pilot should offer advice during an emergency. # Q+ d& b, }9 ^0 }8 B0 l& Y7 p h
或Pilots should offer their advice during an emergency.
: I: @# y$ ]1 |. K$ I N: D 或A pilot should offer his or her advice during an emergency. , x6 F9 K' d+ f$ S4 A& o
NO: When a customer calls, be sure to ask him to leave his phone number. ! e) a: k: }9 M/ [
When a customer calls, be sure to ask him or her to leave his or her phone number.
1 i: N8 H" e; C$ T YES: When a customer calls, be sure to ask for a phone number. 4 ] |' L* D0 z' N+ T3 H8 r# j
或When customers call, be sure to ask for their phone numbers.
~9 X) e, {& B' g8 O NO: Would the guests and their wives please be seated? / k j0 P$ r) s2 R
YES: Would the guests and spouses please be seated? 8 j; R/ `$ ~ N( d
NO: I talked to your woman service representative named Linda early this morning.
' j% R, y! M& a+ a, Z YES: I talked to Linda, your service representative, early this morning. 4 e% d! ]* x# V% Z+ x; G" R# Q, }5 \
NO: "Dear Mr. Porter and Caroline: How are you?" 0 |1 |( r9 q ?1 ` S' b
YES: "Dear Mr. Porter and Ms. Davis: How are you?" |