2012年12月大学英语四级写作技巧指导(10)% o6 |$ A6 {3 c [; V' d
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NO: A newspaper reporter is always mindful of his deadline. ; {- O( D- P z( v f
YES: A newspaper reporter is always mindful of the deadline.
+ h$ I3 ^, r9 R/ S2 G8 f, }9 u2 g M M 或Newspaper reporters are always mindful of their deadlines. 考试用书1 y$ K2 H, T% g) @
NO: A pilot should offer his advice during an emergency.
g- q% `; h6 G0 O* ^+ h, p YES: A pilot should offer advice during an emergency. , J+ M) w# ^, p2 p/ h8 ^1 C
或Pilots should offer their advice during an emergency.
- N+ {5 U5 }) j+ W- N; Y 或A pilot should offer his or her advice during an emergency.
/ i* @3 d |/ j NO: When a customer calls, be sure to ask him to leave his phone number.
, @ n; i1 n8 U7 i6 t- F/ I When a customer calls, be sure to ask him or her to leave his or her phone number.
2 O# a( h( ]) N$ j YES: When a customer calls, be sure to ask for a phone number. % c. v* m1 E0 d6 X n) S1 l# b+ ^
或When customers call, be sure to ask for their phone numbers.
8 F8 i7 l6 y+ B9 v6 l" z NO: Would the guests and their wives please be seated?
. D2 \3 G( Q. x! W, ] YES: Would the guests and spouses please be seated?
+ m1 B9 T: Y; K1 ~% g NO: I talked to your woman service representative named Linda early this morning. 0 I j' m, e: p
YES: I talked to Linda, your service representative, early this morning. ! m1 B/ }& g( E9 ^. s9 R
NO: "Dear Mr. Porter and Caroline: How are you?"
- K% g4 [7 C5 t! n3 a8 L* T" G YES: "Dear Mr. Porter and Ms. Davis: How are you?" |