（三）一致方面的错误
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6 H* p3 ^+ k* G1 E) K; O: R( s在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间，要保持时态、人称、数等的一致。" O: y$ U) w% U( u2 h2 z$ t1 C
（误）Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.8 R' n" S4 S+ a p2 c
（正）Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.
* e: o# O8 y! X【说明】代词应与所指代的先行词保持人称和数上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.! A4 `7 o" j8 v- [) N0 j1 O4 E
（四）平行结构方面的错误
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这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。0 n9 C9 ^) O5 V4 ]
1．a.（误）Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.
$ U2 t9 `; x; I7 c# q; |（正）narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)% t5 l2 v2 \ I P( C" H8 k
b.（误）A great change has been taken place since then.
- e" o" W( p( {（正）A great change has taken place since then.; Y. m" {* K7 q j& @5 W9 i% f) c6 @
c.（误）But it may occur some new problems.
z( A0 @! y+ J! c（正）But some new problems may occur/arise.
) \5 Z' j# X9 k; Wd.（误）Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.
5 ?! X t4 X! q1 T9 S（正）Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.2 [7 H) ~, L0 W
【说明】happen，take place，occur，arise等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构，也不能作为及物动词带宾语的。但学生作文中类似的错误较多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.
5 L7 z: Z$ F4 @' X1 h( {2.（误）The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.
$ G4 m2 ]! e2 D9 o: u s8 d（正）The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.0 K7 z1 G) I4 w5 p* Z6 H
（误）Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.
4 ^: R5 z* j! K# [' \（正）Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.5 ^( ^ z \. X3 m, o
（误）Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.6 o# z( R, w; v1 E8 a
（正）Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.
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（五）断句方面的错误$ @/ J. |$ w2 _) ~! a4 }
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一句句子没有结束，又开始新的一句，结果造成句子结构不全，这就成为断句。3 V; ]# M5 ]7 ?' z2 D
（误）TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.& _) n1 |: @& D# m8 K
（正）TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.2 w% Q. q) m P8 o+ w
【说明】以because，since，if等引导的从句是不能独立成句的，只能依属于主句，所以不能写成另一句。 |
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