六级写作冲刺备考：常见错误分析2

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（三）一致方面的错误

在一个句子内部或紧邻的两三个句子之间，要保持时态、人称、数等的一致。
- I4 _- [* a. Q9 M, @6 Y. W（误）Whether one enjoys or resents advertisements, we are actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
, j* k( w  `) x（正）Whether we enjoy or resent advertisements, we are actually bombarded with them every hour of the day.
% M+ |# [3 z( O8 `, W0 L9 {4 S【说明】代词应与所指代的先行词保持人称和数上的一致。句1也可改成Whether one enjoys or resents the advertisement, he is actually bombarded with it every hour of the day.
* l$ O& G8 t6 _) G2 E（四）平行结构方面的错误
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这里专指语态、比较级、非谓语形式、冠词用法、可数名词和不可数名词、不定代词单复数以及时态等错误。
1．a.（误）Narrow streets easily cause to happen many traffic accidents.
（正）narrow streets easily cause many traffic accidents. (to happen)
2 V! X0 V- a* ^* _7 Sb.（误）A great change has been taken place since then.
2 u" a) G$ N$ v; S% Z, L" A（正）A great change has taken place since then.
c.（误）But it may occur some new problems.
4 Q" g' _6 F. c5 s（正）But some new problems may occur/arise.
6 Z$ o9 v6 y" }0 @( U- ~6 D+ wd.（误）Opportunities are only belonged to those who work hard.
  h  j- E+ e5 d$ |9 L+ d( p（正）Opportunities only belong to those who work hard.
【说明】happen，take place，occur，arise等动词和动词词组一般既不能用作被动结构，也不能作为及物动词带宾语的。但学生作文中类似的错误较多：Our country has taken place a great change in many fields.
2.（误）The pace of our modern life is getting more faster and faster.
6 h% @9 \% B- }1 r2 }5 V（正）The pace of our modern life is getting faster and faster.
（误）Electricity is the most important power in our daily life than other kinds of power.
1 f+ |9 U5 |5 Q$ B) A% r( C4 A（正）Electricity is the most important power in our daily life.
  b! I! T0 X- S（误）Thus our city will be greatly beautiful than it is now.
+ I4 s1 D3 Q$ s" Y' Z* B9 m（正）Thus our city will be far more beautiful than it is now.
【说明】这些都是在使用比较形式时出现的错误。尤其是第1例较普遍。如more easier，more stronger等。

. C% Y3 W* B1 G) E! b+ u  G（五）断句方面的错误
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一句句子没有结束，又开始新的一句，结果造成句子结构不全，这就成为断句。
; s, R, i/ E4 r+ B1 `+ s$ Z（误）TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it.
# b& L8 a4 s2 R9 ^8 l# o1 M. w（正）TV becomes an important part in our daily life，because we cannot live without it.
【说明】以because，since，if等引导的从句是不能独立成句的，只能依属于主句，所以不能写成另一句。