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[六级改错] 大学英语六级:短文改错(一)

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发表于 2012-8-14 10:46:58 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本期重点: 平行结构  / u; o2 T0 [$ a: ^3 E

5 R# X- W; y5 z; D3 r$ I平行结构错误主要指在并列连接词and前后语法结构不对等、不平行。其它并列连词还有but, as well as, or, or else, both … and, neither … nor, either … or, not only … but (also)等可连接两个对等的词和对等的结构。  
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考点例析  
8 |$ k& J% l# |, F/ @1:Computeranalyzed marketing reports can help deciding   & P. M1 D% {9 D- p
which products to emphasize now,which to develop for   
6 Z5 k8 {; L  r# Rthe future, and which to be dropped. ____________  4 b; C( B/ h9 A/ k
解析:本句中三个平行成份which products to emphasize now, which to develop和which to be dropped结构模式应该一致,均采用不定式主动语态,因而to be dropped应改为to drop。(注:在四六级考试中,短文改错只能修改、删除或添加一个单词,不能同时改动两个。本例题旨在反映平行结构的语法性质。)  2 S3 v2 x% X' q: O& L
例2:At the heart of the NEA survey is the belief that our   / \7 c. W3 N  a
democratic System depends on leaders who can think   3 t( N0 W8 G" @( [7 l
critically, analyze texts and writing clearly. ___________  # l/ f' H' B% @8 x
解析:can后面有三个并列的谓语动词,因此writing应改成与think, analyze并列的动词原形write。   ) S. L- G. A  I
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例3:Atrophy is a decrease in size of a cell, organ, tissues, or other part of the body. _______  
; z8 B! n4 R7 ?2 L6 _- V9 @3 A: S! _解析;:并列连词or连接四项名词结构,其中cell 和organ皆为单数形式,故tissues应改为单数tissue。   - W4 Z& `6 @3 k

: u, t) Y/ \: G' P" _/ d3 A- C巩固与拓展  
( J( D$ @( S& G! {* H1 o1.A majority of the reports received from people claiming   
- t$ a2 E( Q7 Q9 ito have seen the lengendaiy Loch Ness monster have  6 D4 q. C0 m2 s( d2 s
proven to be mistakes, misconceptions, or tricked. ___________  5 |. K; I2 C1 R0 ^' Q" A
2. Your semester grade is based not only on how well you   " ^6 N! {, h( O& y( ~, Y
do on each test, but also how you participate in class. ___________  ) C  Y7 S" M1 f# W( ]
3. Modern sience was born when Galileo began trying to explain   1 S3 {  m; I# t7 e0 Q
how things happen and thus originating the method of controlled __________  2 D  L1 J" t' L4 B' t2 v
experiment which now forms the basis of scientific investigation  
8 u* E1 e8 n; X2 T% p' z! T: e5 V( B# q4. Restrict your self to one or two pages, and listing ___________  
7 ]& f7 C; ?  W8 {  m( fany publications or referees on a separate sheet.  
9 D0 o6 t) @4 X5. The House proposal would have barred the federal   
# w2 v7 i0 I  F1 G! u/ N: Sgovernment from demanding library records, read lists, __________  7 j& W' }) N0 A6 m+ [7 N8 r
book customer lists and other material in terrorism and  
2 o' }  x$ Y4 m1 X2 {8 gintelligence investigations.    C$ [% X( m0 w1 y# x& c  j

$ L- |2 C& W' ]7 P/ p7 e6 l# n综合改错  * E7 E4 l% U2 s9 ]3 J9 O
The biggest safety threat facing airlines today may not be a terrorist  
+ h3 n& {- m' xWith a gun, than the man with the portable computer in business class. 1._____  
, D2 O8 H  h  x$ X* PIn the last 15 years, pilots report well over 100 incidents tha could 2. _____  
3 ?& |' |/ ]  p8 G1 X8 F0 Thave been caused by electromagnetic interference. The source of this  3 W& C* n/ ^: y% E6 S
interference remains confirmed, but increasingly, experts are pointing the 3._____  " i7 w4 f# p* q% Y# w. ]
blame at portable electronic devices such as portable computers, radio and 4. _____  6 u# J& [, T' N1 @$ G% H* W
cassette players and mobile telephones.  : f5 e1 A4 u) |
RTCA, an organization advertises the aviation industry, has 5. ______  / s( o6 v' ~) p# Q3 n
recommended that the airline bans such devices from 6.______  - D- k% ?1 o# h
used during “critical” stages of lignt, particularly take-off and landing. 7._______  1 L) \- D. z) Y6 }; l8 V
Some experts have gone further, calling for a total ban during all flights.  : D. K, p  |' ^
Currently, rules on using these devices are left up to individual airlines.  
. g& p& M0 S- V& B7 Q. z- o6 TAnd although some airlines prohibit passengers from using such equipment  
* R, q5 c2 {8 k+ s0 Yduring take-off and landing, most are willing to enforce a total ban, given 8. ______  
7 ^$ ?2 I6 {8 n, H0 y" Qthat many pasengers want to work during flights.  
, z6 A! H" l' ~7 l) m+ EThe difficulty is predicting how electromagnetic fields may affect an   ! ]% x# @" E4 F3 D. r6 D: [
aircraft’s computers. Experts know that portable devices emit radiation  * V) ^* P# J7 ]# l5 y# n
which affect those wavelength which craft use for navigation and 9.______  
4 i+ P3 G+ V+ D7 ?+ rcommunication. But , because they have not been able to reproduce   - T# R7 ]2 u4 E4 W3 l9 f5 }' j
these effects in a laboratory, they have no way of knowing   1 x) E9 Y! F6 H" U
whether the interference might be danger or not. 10.______
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-14 10:46:59 | 显示全部楼层

大学英语六级:短文改错(一)

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1. tricked -> tricks 9 `3 I! J" R. t% A0 V  U5 S
并列连词or连接三项成分。前两项均为名词,故tricked应改为名词tricks与前面的mistakes和misconceptions平行。 9 ]% d8 l7 N- T/ O, d, s: a
2. how前加on
5 X, O& J9 n) m3. originating -> originated ) s0 Y$ L2 ~  x  u% ^2 C
And后面的thus说明并列句的第二部分是和前面的began对应,而非与trying对应。
( M; i) l  m, r# _4. listing -> list 5 F0 D- w4 F+ o2 T8 [  k
这句是祈使句,list与前面的restrict并列。
2 L2 P* V4 k. s; O; N5. read -> reading
9 g' k2 {6 q% x9 j* X [决战六级 短文改错] [第廿期] [平行结构] [已奖励] ' ]- M  E# Z$ q9 W) T' h
  
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, |- D& h  x+ d* t% d/ ~5 g& I综合练习   x9 x4 z# e. b# P! |% l, p+ B& `
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1. than -> but
# n1 A5 J5 M! d; l" [: I/ q此处为固定句式not…but…,此句大意为“最大的飞行隐患不是持枪的恐怖分子,而是商务舱中携带手提电脑的人。”
% q+ J, Q2 D+ u3 `+ y2. report-> reported
0 L8 O+ x7 |/ Q% o4 L该句子的时间状语是In the last 15 years表明其基本时态是一般过去时。 # `" r" o" D  Z& i
3. confirmed -> unconfirmed * F9 r3 y) n+ K
根据上下文,电脑对飞机影响的原因还不大清楚,故使用unconfirmed。
2 m  @9 O3 b% [! l9 ^4. radio -> radios
2 |; ?/ a4 G. v8 W4 d5. organization后加which 5 M( ~9 T9 e0 k+ I
本句主语是RTCA,谓语是has recommended,中间的an organization advertises the aviation industry是RTCA的同位语,所以advertises the aviation industry应该是做定语修饰organization。故在organization后加which。
3 a# [) R3 @; _5 s5 Z6. bans -> ban
# e" W- L7 i, O! p* ^& q7 q. urecommend后面的宾语从句要使用虚拟语气,形式为(should) + v,should可省略。
; d: b2 ^% e$ Q* o6 }7. used前加being 5 J1 F. z# k& h' b4 G. F( e' S5 M7 F
From是介词,后面不能直接使用过去分词used,如果要表示相同的意思,要是用动名词形式才行。又因为devices与use之间是被动关系,所以应该加上being。 0 n- k2 Z& w3 r" q, J: V% O- L
8. willing -> unwilling / reluctant或在willing前加not
2 V# o7 A1 E' s; M8 F" v此句的正确意思是:尽管一些航空公司禁止乘客在飞机起飞和着陆时使用那些电子产品,但由于许多乘客很想在飞行时继续办公,所以很多航空公司也不愿意彻底实施禁令。 & ?: d  v* C& Q; W$ d2 b
9.affect -> affects
! u1 M7 r# P  H* e定语从句先行词radiation是单数,从句的谓语动词也要用单数。
# G: P, D% |8 e6 l6 h% p10. danger -> dangerous
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