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[六级改错] 大学英语六级:短文改错(一)

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发表于 2012-8-14 10:46:58 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本期重点: 平行结构  
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+ S" N' W- h" W' L0 E. Y, b2 ]平行结构错误主要指在并列连接词and前后语法结构不对等、不平行。其它并列连词还有but, as well as, or, or else, both … and, neither … nor, either … or, not only … but (also)等可连接两个对等的词和对等的结构。  . x" T5 f) X% Y

# I" Q# C) v7 F考点例析  1 l8 r! v. y3 ^& J
1:Computeranalyzed marketing reports can help deciding   ( A5 a8 _; I5 y- H
which products to emphasize now,which to develop for   
& G% M4 X  G5 Z9 v3 Athe future, and which to be dropped. ____________  , L$ B3 v* ^7 A+ y' _( Y' a
解析:本句中三个平行成份which products to emphasize now, which to develop和which to be dropped结构模式应该一致,均采用不定式主动语态,因而to be dropped应改为to drop。(注:在四六级考试中,短文改错只能修改、删除或添加一个单词,不能同时改动两个。本例题旨在反映平行结构的语法性质。)  
: K0 q) z% C5 T! B: I8 H例2:At the heart of the NEA survey is the belief that our   ! s9 Y; |! ]: I/ A
democratic System depends on leaders who can think   7 `4 B6 a) e  R( t8 D( I7 W
critically, analyze texts and writing clearly. ___________  5 _) T" m" U* W
解析:can后面有三个并列的谓语动词,因此writing应改成与think, analyze并列的动词原形write。   " K6 ]9 y2 ], k* L6 w1 r

7 y! B5 M7 G3 j1 B2 N& U6 i: |1 Y例3:Atrophy is a decrease in size of a cell, organ, tissues, or other part of the body. _______  
3 t) S7 ^7 c# s7 v$ q解析;:并列连词or连接四项名词结构,其中cell 和organ皆为单数形式,故tissues应改为单数tissue。   
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9 v9 u, M( j+ P7 h% [5 }+ A7 S巩固与拓展  , u, V! ^: ^! ^7 @9 `$ b! b
1.A majority of the reports received from people claiming   
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proven to be mistakes, misconceptions, or tricked. ___________  
' C% }. q& C% K5 L1 v; k2. Your semester grade is based not only on how well you   ( P0 X4 M* z# @4 U! i+ z' }2 Y
do on each test, but also how you participate in class. ___________  
+ m7 i+ F) h4 T3. Modern sience was born when Galileo began trying to explain   
$ s8 d+ n( K+ N9 R# m( m4 z0 ~how things happen and thus originating the method of controlled __________  # B, \0 Y7 l! L6 Q
experiment which now forms the basis of scientific investigation  
0 V8 D% R; U7 [7 M1 h4. Restrict your self to one or two pages, and listing ___________  
" Q  N3 d6 K- X9 R/ ^any publications or referees on a separate sheet.  0 T# v: F3 y9 O: I
5. The House proposal would have barred the federal   
2 H& M2 V/ Q. w" n% t) Kgovernment from demanding library records, read lists, __________  , T* X  g& ?1 h; G# Y
book customer lists and other material in terrorism and  9 |/ X6 i: q% }1 `7 t
intelligence investigations.  
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综合改错  
) h; n9 _' a  t7 t) l9 }" V$ u& p! ^The biggest safety threat facing airlines today may not be a terrorist  : |7 h) {" G! F+ E) R
With a gun, than the man with the portable computer in business class. 1._____  $ k, Z; t2 ^( \+ F/ j6 n
In the last 15 years, pilots report well over 100 incidents tha could 2. _____  ' e# @7 [+ ]6 D. ?6 i& a9 V
have been caused by electromagnetic interference. The source of this  
/ T- S+ x; c3 b( ]" \/ Rinterference remains confirmed, but increasingly, experts are pointing the 3._____  . B; C% `8 }3 h. G$ O4 v
blame at portable electronic devices such as portable computers, radio and 4. _____  
# z- y5 E5 l6 @4 @) Dcassette players and mobile telephones.  $ |( T1 p- v! h( @
RTCA, an organization advertises the aviation industry, has 5. ______  
8 [2 h% [' B# X6 a5 g! krecommended that the airline bans such devices from 6.______  
; M) ?1 L+ }) j9 `# |9 v7 Cused during “critical” stages of lignt, particularly take-off and landing. 7._______  3 U& q2 {- v: [3 S& W# R5 [
Some experts have gone further, calling for a total ban during all flights.  
/ D/ z6 v) _( i& ^) J( n5 X/ e7 y. jCurrently, rules on using these devices are left up to individual airlines.  
, q4 p( o. ?! }1 U! WAnd although some airlines prohibit passengers from using such equipment  1 D# D! c" ?: A+ v- J+ Z1 B- m
during take-off and landing, most are willing to enforce a total ban, given 8. ______  
3 L. |, e9 g8 h9 b: D! |that many pasengers want to work during flights.  . \4 b9 v% [7 b: l, X1 g0 d
The difficulty is predicting how electromagnetic fields may affect an   
# D, g3 E. n' Q" w' Q; faircraft’s computers. Experts know that portable devices emit radiation  1 d# I8 \& c) }6 V. S# D$ x. j; F
which affect those wavelength which craft use for navigation and 9.______  
2 R, x/ M3 U+ t! E1 [- \communication. But , because they have not been able to reproduce   
* w" B0 D" x) N3 J$ Kthese effects in a laboratory, they have no way of knowing   
/ l6 L2 N2 M7 u# Zwhether the interference might be danger or not. 10.______
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-14 10:46:59 | 显示全部楼层

大学英语六级:短文改错(一)

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巩固与拓展 ( t" e9 j( r2 |
1. tricked -> tricks
' V! B/ }# d# h: h并列连词or连接三项成分。前两项均为名词,故tricked应改为名词tricks与前面的mistakes和misconceptions平行。
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0 v0 e9 E* d" _  n1 C4 U5 t* u* O3. originating -> originated $ A9 y  ^  l9 y; p7 x6 |1 K3 N- b
And后面的thus说明并列句的第二部分是和前面的began对应,而非与trying对应。 * @# e7 P9 L" p8 s7 X
4. listing -> list
# S7 \: H, D. _- v  L这句是祈使句,list与前面的restrict并列。
( [& Q/ O; E& f! e. {  L5. read -> reading ' s* n- \. o! A  ?! `
[决战六级 短文改错] [第廿期] [平行结构] [已奖励] & I1 E5 ^: P6 z, a6 `( c8 D! J6 Z
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综合练习
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1. than -> but " t& a7 j" x5 q+ |. u/ D
此处为固定句式not…but…,此句大意为“最大的飞行隐患不是持枪的恐怖分子,而是商务舱中携带手提电脑的人。” 9 c1 Q4 q7 x* k: `2 f
2. report-> reported $ z! Z( Z8 G: ]3 j
该句子的时间状语是In the last 15 years表明其基本时态是一般过去时。
( U! u  c( X0 ?& k3. confirmed -> unconfirmed
  L1 }. Q! `, A3 i1 L, J根据上下文,电脑对飞机影响的原因还不大清楚,故使用unconfirmed。
2 i1 U/ J4 p9 K  ^# n+ ~- b( x4. radio -> radios
! ?. q2 U+ k1 z5. organization后加which
: U2 q( B: {: b: E本句主语是RTCA,谓语是has recommended,中间的an organization advertises the aviation industry是RTCA的同位语,所以advertises the aviation industry应该是做定语修饰organization。故在organization后加which。
& k, N' c$ k& i0 Z6. bans -> ban . p+ V; @4 ~5 r5 {" R4 Z  z
recommend后面的宾语从句要使用虚拟语气,形式为(should) + v,should可省略。
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From是介词,后面不能直接使用过去分词used,如果要表示相同的意思,要是用动名词形式才行。又因为devices与use之间是被动关系,所以应该加上being。
/ `4 T1 N/ M9 j8. willing -> unwilling / reluctant或在willing前加not
; f+ O8 ~+ r, g# s+ {  V此句的正确意思是:尽管一些航空公司禁止乘客在飞机起飞和着陆时使用那些电子产品,但由于许多乘客很想在飞行时继续办公,所以很多航空公司也不愿意彻底实施禁令。   o" ]1 v9 W$ K4 i- Q; h) f
9.affect -> affects
4 c; W/ V, m6 W定语从句先行词radiation是单数,从句的谓语动词也要用单数。
: D" o5 j# s7 ]' W; q5 c$ p10. danger -> dangerous
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