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[六级改错] 新六级直击考点:综合改错题十五

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发表于 2012-8-14 10:46:58 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
十、时态语态和语气的使用错误 ; o7 P4 N; U! h9 b
1. 时态错误。 主要是指在一个句子中,出现不同的时态,从而造成时态不一致,如: He can’t remember what he once knows. 4 n; R7 U) i5 @2 [. S
2. 语态错误。 在 cet6 综合改错题中最常见的语态错误是被动语态被误用为主动语态。不及物动词不能带宾语,因而也就没有被动语态。如: She was very angry at not telling the truth when she listened to the account. ( a! O* q( Y. I" L1 Y. s5 X
3. 虚拟语态错误。 此类使用错误在综合改错题中主要表现为主语和从句的语气不协调,如: We strongly suggest that Henry is told about his physical condition as soon as possible. 句中动词 suggest 之后的从句应用虚拟语气,故“ is ”应该 “ be ”或“ should be ”。类似的动词还有 demand , insist , order 等等。
) L( C" m' S: M例 1 - l* Z0 W7 x7 A, T
These newly wedded couples usually came here and meet 1.__________
1 V& x# k+ \2 z/ Dtogether to hold parties. 4 Z1 P& s. f3 \( z
由于前面的时态已经限制为过去时,而且 came 和 meet 是并列结构,两者时态应该保持一致,因此应该将 meet 改为 met ,或者将 came 改为 come ,具体情况依据上下文的语境时态而定。 2 B/ a2 H+ X+ N
例 2
% o3 t) L( m# K9 Y* o2 ~Computer analyzed marketing reports can help deciding
+ B8 c0 z9 M* d/ ?8 C% u* |which products to emphasize now, which to develop
  t3 Y4 {- w+ N/ _5 |! R9 afor the future, and which to be dropped. 1.__________ - g0 }/ k# ]) b/ g8 \# N( o
本句中三个平行成分 which products to emphasize now , which to develop for the future 和 which to be dropped 结构模式应该一致,均采用不定式主动语态,因而 to be dropped 应改为 to drop 。 * E- B0 s+ C$ E! F- `7 L
例 3 - A+ q" W6 m( g, W! a
In the first place, the scientist at once put some
& O$ h: z! a- |5 W) G$ u- S( Pkind of material into the liquid which has already 1.__________ ) y$ d0 t  z6 |9 t& M. L
securely obtained. ; G6 w2 R& V& d6 A  O$ O+ d
根据句子意思可知,此处的 liquid 不可能为动作的发生者,显然此处应该是被动语态,故应该将 has 改为 is 或者在 has 后加 been 均可,意思是指“已经安全获得的液体”。
! T! h9 W! Q# {; j6 x6 @- w例 4
1 b) ]1 G& g6 {, z5 F7 nDid they gone there yesterday, they would have discovered 1.__________
2 |; a: c  a% o) hthe truth. ! U5 V4 d1 W, b% z8 B
根据句子意思可知,这句话是说如果他们昨天去了就会发现事实真相,然而他们并未去,此处是虚拟语气,因此应该使用虚拟语气的格式,将 Did 改为 Had 。
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-14 10:46:59 | 显示全部楼层

新六级直击考点:综合改错题十五

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, @1 m3 `6 `& {( d7 G1 These small households were portraits of
" D) \  H7 H+ J6 Y/ F# o1 Cindependence: the entire family, mother, father,
6 _# [1 F0 w. ~. L0 ^: Jchildren, even grandparents live in a small house " @3 z! Z: e# ^1 x; _$ V# `, V
and working together to support each other. 1.__________
, S1 T2 \# h3 B1 r1 q! Z2 In the meantime the unscientific world awoke
, s2 z, g% \1 \2 W: a4 nto the fact that scientists are on the track of a great 2.__________
$ _7 p4 B; u( M7 `* Y( a4 M. udiscovery.
! K3 w* G+ Y/ x1 w6 |( P8 e7 k3 For in 1895, the year of the Curie marriage,
/ ], }1 t7 J: x( x$ m$ lRoentgen discovered the famous rays that are 3.__________ % H6 t( H7 G% O5 {
named after him--- he forerunners of modern & A  d5 ]8 t1 D% P+ _; D
X-rays. ; s& E. y) e/ y) j6 _& B" X9 z
4 Mary hoped at one time to study at the University
8 j, {# g( p/ H6 J. Y+ w8 Eof Cracow, then under Austrian rule. But when she
+ u/ V/ s3 m; Q4 I8 U% r5 W! kdemanded to allowed to attend science lectures, the 4.__________
$ s" ?9 {" l9 O% n! j/ ?secretary said that science was not a thing in which
' o. ~" `& p  y$ K- F, fwomen can meddle. - S$ J4 ~, a8 ?. T- _  r; T! e$ _
5 Many part-time stu dents expected to offered some 5.__________
0 m/ J6 d: m3 M+ ljobs on campus during the coming summer vacation.
; f. L' i1 T1 R* G1 u# i. \- S6 Many people who live in London think that life in
: `. t  _  @4 z& P# c% Pa large city offered special advantages. 6.__________ # [. p4 Z- j/ {( W% Z
7 The changes that taken place in air travel during 7.__________
4 r2 E& K- O% f; Vthe last sixty years would have seemed impossible
3 t# I% y  t' f4 W& a6 K; y* |; Vto even the most Brilliant scientists at the turn of ' U+ m! L  W% i( g. b9 \2 M
the 19th century. $ E7 B. q8 s( P2 C) o. V
8 I regret having left the work unfinished, I should
$ a7 m$ M  f/ r9 l0 whave plan every thing ahead carefully. 8.__________
0 }, v: ~/ W4 R- q: g9 No bank kept enough cash to pay all its depositors 9.__________
4 `% b7 w" `" y+ p* yin full at one time.
3 v0 [; y! M& d10 The Conestoga wagon, used for carry heavy loads 10.__________
8 K8 w5 ?0 |9 s, h1 I# zover long distances, originated around 1725 in a region
0 i" @( m0 X0 r# [* A0 D& l6 Bof Pennsylvania occupied by Conestoga Indians.
2 |# y; r" f' z" d答案:0 g, e/ `: \5 V  O
1. working→work。此句总体上讲述的是这些小家庭独立的掠影,而后半句解释到这些小家庭的成员生活在一起、工作在一起的情景,应该用一般现在时,和live保持一致。2 a; X9 G3 C1 ~
2. are→were。/ l& B2 n6 t3 C0 W  d
3. are→were。/ s% h2 g* {4 R% u; Y. m
4. allow前加be。“be allowed to do sth.”是“被允许作……”的意思。
! c$ ?/ X2 W. L5. offered前加be。“offer”是及物动词,后面应该接双宾语结构,即“offer sb. sth.”而在该句中缺少成分而只有宾语补主语,应该将其改为被动语态,即“be offered sth.”' x& [' z" `2 v2 ?' d
6. offered→offers。
) y7 O! ~: I4 i% i% y3 L- u7. taken前加have。
+ R  t" T4 [& N8. plan→planned。9 y) [: {7 H' L: b$ N5 ~
9. kept→keep。& l/ m: c+ u# F
10. carry→carrying。
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