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[六级改错] 新六级直击考点:综合改错题十五

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发表于 2012-8-14 10:46:58 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
十、时态语态和语气的使用错误
6 V( e) i0 K& M) f6 ]1. 时态错误。 主要是指在一个句子中,出现不同的时态,从而造成时态不一致,如: He can’t remember what he once knows. ! |* A) n7 M% X, G  v. D# N
2. 语态错误。 在 cet6 综合改错题中最常见的语态错误是被动语态被误用为主动语态。不及物动词不能带宾语,因而也就没有被动语态。如: She was very angry at not telling the truth when she listened to the account.
3 v! R+ R3 s4 z( T3. 虚拟语态错误。 此类使用错误在综合改错题中主要表现为主语和从句的语气不协调,如: We strongly suggest that Henry is told about his physical condition as soon as possible. 句中动词 suggest 之后的从句应用虚拟语气,故“ is ”应该 “ be ”或“ should be ”。类似的动词还有 demand , insist , order 等等。
" N1 X0 R3 p1 P. q( _例 1 3 U4 H4 Q: I. f8 ~
These newly wedded couples usually came here and meet 1.__________
/ i0 `7 D( j# p4 M/ c; z( Ctogether to hold parties. * l: {; X* t/ N& G$ d8 }
由于前面的时态已经限制为过去时,而且 came 和 meet 是并列结构,两者时态应该保持一致,因此应该将 meet 改为 met ,或者将 came 改为 come ,具体情况依据上下文的语境时态而定。 * t6 Q: W+ O# N7 S1 _
例 2 ; y. H: x1 f6 X$ b1 }. ?
Computer analyzed marketing reports can help deciding 7 P: Q7 X- S9 n3 G) t& x
which products to emphasize now, which to develop 9 o5 t; B; V3 E
for the future, and which to be dropped. 1.__________ , ?- J4 R7 {; b4 {
本句中三个平行成分 which products to emphasize now , which to develop for the future 和 which to be dropped 结构模式应该一致,均采用不定式主动语态,因而 to be dropped 应改为 to drop 。 : \/ z  v" G! o" M+ s0 n4 W- x1 s' @
例 3
$ J; B  S8 l. T/ P  d  Y$ _In the first place, the scientist at once put some * W/ F( W  p/ O! |& H) W
kind of material into the liquid which has already 1.__________
: Q& U$ G2 j* C  I9 `" B. L+ nsecurely obtained. ! F9 [# s6 D) n( H7 ~. X6 a2 J' A
根据句子意思可知,此处的 liquid 不可能为动作的发生者,显然此处应该是被动语态,故应该将 has 改为 is 或者在 has 后加 been 均可,意思是指“已经安全获得的液体”。 4 H9 S& v1 K$ \4 N4 S
例 4 6 Q4 m2 s' x3 e: C  r6 A  s$ j& K
Did they gone there yesterday, they would have discovered 1.__________
, }) E. O% C1 m8 @: Lthe truth.
! I1 l% e! S, {8 Z  Y根据句子意思可知,这句话是说如果他们昨天去了就会发现事实真相,然而他们并未去,此处是虚拟语气,因此应该使用虚拟语气的格式,将 Did 改为 Had 。
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-8-14 10:46:59 | 显示全部楼层

新六级直击考点:综合改错题十五

练习题 $ m( _* Y9 w4 I* u4 A
1 These small households were portraits of 9 s2 G) z9 S0 j0 _9 A
independence: the entire family, mother, father,
. a& w3 k( H, T( e. n2 m+ V: Dchildren, even grandparents live in a small house
( ]9 Z5 o7 j2 b- l9 K% x2 N7 vand working together to support each other. 1.__________ - m9 v" b+ u# y& H1 ^3 }0 r/ X
2 In the meantime the unscientific world awoke & Y3 d0 v% s+ r  P/ `
to the fact that scientists are on the track of a great 2.__________ . w" H9 ^( q5 q; |# S- Y0 _6 X! s1 `4 P
discovery. % ?  J7 f( p2 ]1 [+ S; C' L
3 For in 1895, the year of the Curie marriage, 3 D/ ~& C4 k1 w' C: n3 A
Roentgen discovered the famous rays that are 3.__________
5 S5 I1 a2 |& hnamed after him--- he forerunners of modern 4 p8 O5 d2 ~6 f8 T$ D, B5 H+ u
X-rays. 8 ]2 u$ A% v* w/ s9 e. K5 M) g  b
4 Mary hoped at one time to study at the University + Y( F0 ~1 w8 Z$ U, g) u0 O+ _
of Cracow, then under Austrian rule. But when she 9 V7 C6 V; v4 J* Q! B4 [8 X$ e1 v
demanded to allowed to attend science lectures, the 4.__________ 6 z+ o# `! z  ~/ J2 x: K8 y' s
secretary said that science was not a thing in which
# J* H9 W/ _0 n6 p5 j& I- awomen can meddle. + h( U% R, W" [+ o/ O4 h
5 Many part-time stu dents expected to offered some 5.__________
$ M: Z7 {0 _  p3 sjobs on campus during the coming summer vacation.
2 n  {$ O. ]8 T$ O. w8 X" r3 ^6 Many people who live in London think that life in
- I9 }( R, o( l! [2 F+ Wa large city offered special advantages. 6.__________ ( d* r" |  k7 q& D4 a
7 The changes that taken place in air travel during 7.__________
. C* K( `, `/ p% ~6 S$ ^+ @3 z$ zthe last sixty years would have seemed impossible 0 e: A" q+ G9 K; H$ j
to even the most Brilliant scientists at the turn of
8 d) N$ {! l- z% V- `8 ?the 19th century. ( |9 F. K/ g- Z, u
8 I regret having left the work unfinished, I should * I* F  c; a5 h2 ~9 Q3 i% K+ S
have plan every thing ahead carefully. 8.__________
0 |! J2 `! b- o& `/ d9 No bank kept enough cash to pay all its depositors 9.__________
, P4 g3 U% k0 F, C+ U0 l, Lin full at one time.
% z3 S' Y$ j0 \4 `$ A10 The Conestoga wagon, used for carry heavy loads 10.__________
& E1 T# e6 e+ T* r/ Jover long distances, originated around 1725 in a region
! |3 d% y3 t& v$ tof Pennsylvania occupied by Conestoga Indians.
9 z; k9 Z& \' H答案:
- F8 n7 j! u1 ^+ s  l. H1. working→work。此句总体上讲述的是这些小家庭独立的掠影,而后半句解释到这些小家庭的成员生活在一起、工作在一起的情景,应该用一般现在时,和live保持一致。& o6 g# d+ u: w/ X
2. are→were。
4 Q: F+ J! C! `3. are→were。4 v" E  `3 W  \
4. allow前加be。“be allowed to do sth.”是“被允许作……”的意思。
. f" l$ Q4 P' y% V9 V: `+ v! j4 P  b5. offered前加be。“offer”是及物动词,后面应该接双宾语结构,即“offer sb. sth.”而在该句中缺少成分而只有宾语补主语,应该将其改为被动语态,即“be offered sth.”7 B" ^8 M7 P( D
6. offered→offers。7 k- b; ^1 ]; a5 b8 c5 F
7. taken前加have。
' D9 ?5 ^) |2 t4 `3 @3 e1 F  x8. plan→planned。& _  K+ |# V2 s
9. kept→keep。
  p" ~$ }7 j" @7 U0 r10. carry→carrying。
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