英语专四专八写作怎样使句子多样化2

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　　二、多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了。例如：
　　1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.
% J+ O7 a+ c- J( I3 y/ U　　Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
, G4 w" i- d2 A9 C8 c" Z$ S　　2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.
　　Better: She compares prices and quality.
　　三、尽量运用主动语态。例如：
1 o9 {8 R8 P) p4 }, o8 p3 e　　1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.
6 ^, u. P! m+ r/ J: k0 G, W; P  E　　Better: Charity has supported the organization.
　　2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.
2 O) E+ E, s& S. q( o, d  W* b, k　　Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.
　　四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。例如：
　　1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.
9 v" f' f$ G3 [; o　　Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.
　　2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.
0 L# F4 H2 u& `# ~3 z* G7 t　　Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.
　　3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
　　Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
% C3 U9 |7 x! T4 a7 @7 d　　4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.
+ C# l9 D5 V2 L0 D　　Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.
- x( F2 X8 J+ \7 r  }! V　　五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。例如：
　　1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.
+ ^' q+ e! N' V* n! G+ M# {& I; S7 V　　Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.
　　2、Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.
　　Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.