英语专四专八写作怎样使句子多样化2

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　　二、多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了。例如：
　　1、Poor: My supervisor went past my desk.
　　Better: My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk.
　　2、Poor: She is a careful shopper.
+ d7 B* v; x; Y1 p　　Better: She compares prices and quality.
! l4 A$ O  ~& w9 K- H　　三、尽量运用主动语态。例如：
: L/ u/ y- a/ L5 _% t5 d$ V　　1、Weak: The organization has been supported by charity.
4 ]9 k# V! @4 c% t4 n/ k6 H/ X　　Better: Charity has supported the organization.
　　2、Weak: The biscuits were stacked on a plate.
　　Better: Mother stacked the biscuits on a plate.
　　四、防止使用语意冗长累赘的词语。例如：
　　1、Wordy: My little sister has a preference for chocolate milk.
" V! j! z+ w! c1 `  C　　Improved: My little sister prefers chocolate milk.
　　2、Wordy: We are in receipt of your letter and intend to follow your recommendations.
　　Improved: We have received your letter and intended to follow your recommendation.
　　3、Redundant: We had a serious crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
+ c, l% q4 _, X% b& e　　Improved: We had a crisis at school yesterday when our chemistry laboratory caught fire.
　　4、Redundant: My sister and I bought the same, identical dress in different stores.
　　Improved: My sister and I bought the same dress in different stores.
　　五、杜绝滥用陈旧词语或难懂的专业术语。例如：
* |. D( o) z0 u+ h  v8 g　　1、Weak: They will not agree to his proposals in any shape or form.
+ J: S1 U; n9 ^4 x5 O　　Improved: They will not agree to any of his proposals.
& K) M- P& O! [6 N　　2、Weak: I need her financial input before I can guesstimate our expenditures next fall.
　　Improved: I need her financial figures before I can estimate our expenditures next fall.