英语专业八级改错练习题及答案解析(三十五)

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　　In department stores and closets all over the world, they are
　　waiting. Their outward appearance seems rather appealing since __1__
　　they come in a variety of styles, textures, and colors.
6 }- H( V; D& y$ C1 o$ L" r. g: l2 ]  M　　And they are ultimately the biggest deception that exists in the __2__
0 C& }2 q1 ~  i7 V　　fashionable industry today. What are they? They are high heels __3__
7 F* L& t1 O1 s　　--woman’s worst enemy ( whether she knows it or not). High heel __4__
5 m  F" u1 G/ ]8 [　　shoes are the downfall of modern society. Fashion myths have led
, d1 H3 f+ _4 @: D　　women to believe that they are more beautiful or sophisticating __5__
: |0 Y2 k& `2 t7 c; r4 j3 I　　for wearing heels, but in reality, heels succeed on posing short as __6__
% ^8 ]/ ^7 G- R% q  [; T9 k　　as well as long term hardships. Women should fight the high hell
1 P0 x) C1 `! S0 ?8 D　　industry by refusing to use or purchase them in order to save the
　　world of unnecessary physical and psychological suffering. __7__
　　For the sake of fairness, it must be noted that there is a positive
, c# C& v* ~% k1 [$ R　　side to high heels. First, heels are excellent for aerating lawns.
! a, D# a$ x+ Z　　Anyone who has ever worn heels on grass know what I am talking __8__
　　about. A simple trip around the yard on a pair of those babies __9__
: i1 a3 V# y! H6 ]& O+ P　　eliminates all needs to call for a lawn care specialist, and provides __10__
　　the perfect-sized holes to give any lawn oxygen without all those
1 H# }, F# e, R6 D; I0 N　　messy chunks of dirt lying around.

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　　参考答案：
8 `# g& t; }! C( }+ w" i& y3 F( m　　1.since改为because或者for
　　当since表示原因时，它往往出现在句子的开头而非中间。
　　2.And改为But
　　从与上一段的关系看来，这里是转折而不是承接。
　　3.fashionable改为fashion
　　fashionable是形容词表示“时尚的，时髦的”，而这里所指的是“时尚产业”，所以应该用它的名词形式。
　　4.woman前加上a或者woman改为women
　　可数名词单数形式前面必须加冠词，因此这里须加上a，或者将woman变成服侍形式表类指。
　　5.sophisticating改为sophisticated
　　6.on改为in
9 A' X6 D- }" g0 i　　succeed 与介词in连用，后面加动词ing形式。如：
　　We have already succeeded in working out ground rules with the Department of Defense.
' v, l1 I: R1 x$ d　　7.of 改为from
　　save sb from doing sth 表示“避免某人做某事”。
　　8.know改为knows
5 W) Y2 y. ~* X0 u* V& w　　主语和谓语在形式上须一致，anyone在语义上表达的是单数含义。
1 o7 Y( l: \& l) d# @* T　　9.on改为in
　　英语表示穿戴往往用介词in。
　　10.needs改为need
　　尽管need前用了all来限定，但need所指的是“叫来草坪护理专家”这单一的含义，因此应该用单数，all在这里只是起到强调的作用。