英语专业八级改错练习题及答案解析(三十五)

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　　In department stores and closets all over the world, they are
  W4 G2 R9 q  r0 W6 T) Q　　waiting. Their outward appearance seems rather appealing since __1__
　　they come in a variety of styles, textures, and colors.
　　And they are ultimately the biggest deception that exists in the __2__
  a, y' g2 J4 ~- H8 A- L　　fashionable industry today. What are they? They are high heels __3__
  M2 @! T1 m; I+ y- z　　--woman’s worst enemy ( whether she knows it or not). High heel __4__
) W+ @9 x! `6 }& y) ]) A4 v　　shoes are the downfall of modern society. Fashion myths have led
! |8 h; R: @( I: c　　women to believe that they are more beautiful or sophisticating __5__
　　for wearing heels, but in reality, heels succeed on posing short as __6__
　　as well as long term hardships. Women should fight the high hell
　　industry by refusing to use or purchase them in order to save the
+ U7 @; q9 o5 F. K　　world of unnecessary physical and psychological suffering. __7__
　　For the sake of fairness, it must be noted that there is a positive
- P' s. ]  Q. [3 @3 R% h$ I2 \5 R　　side to high heels. First, heels are excellent for aerating lawns.
4 C6 }! E" u4 w. S2 p! [+ H5 _' K; v　　Anyone who has ever worn heels on grass know what I am talking __8__
　　about. A simple trip around the yard on a pair of those babies __9__
/ P) _/ u& s( o4 ~　　eliminates all needs to call for a lawn care specialist, and provides __10__
, z* q" Z! o( t/ N4 Y$ `　　the perfect-sized holes to give any lawn oxygen without all those
" ^0 u/ T8 o* s; z, J　　messy chunks of dirt lying around.

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　　参考答案：
$ C: e9 C, y& L. |9 z# u& o　　1.since改为because或者for
; X3 y; j6 s8 R: ^/ K" L7 P! k/ v　　当since表示原因时，它往往出现在句子的开头而非中间。
　　2.And改为But
　　从与上一段的关系看来，这里是转折而不是承接。
　　3.fashionable改为fashion
　　fashionable是形容词表示“时尚的，时髦的”，而这里所指的是“时尚产业”，所以应该用它的名词形式。
" H" O% Y/ |# J　　4.woman前加上a或者woman改为women
　　可数名词单数形式前面必须加冠词，因此这里须加上a，或者将woman变成服侍形式表类指。
% w2 P- K, J+ ?: [　　5.sophisticating改为sophisticated
　　6.on改为in
- A; e1 p% K! m# _" y# `9 o　　succeed 与介词in连用，后面加动词ing形式。如：
' M1 Q& s- o  L) L) r' F5 s  A　　We have already succeeded in working out ground rules with the Department of Defense.
　　7.of 改为from
　　save sb from doing sth 表示“避免某人做某事”。
　　8.know改为knows
8 B: o. {' i' |$ n* h; K) w* _　　主语和谓语在形式上须一致，anyone在语义上表达的是单数含义。
. v' X' O, C9 `7 |. p1 f　　9.on改为in
% \6 i4 r+ A0 L' E6 x5 `　　英语表示穿戴往往用介词in。
　　10.needs改为need
　　尽管need前用了all来限定，但need所指的是“叫来草坪护理专家”这单一的含义，因此应该用单数，all在这里只是起到强调的作用。