语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中,语法错误,尤其是较为严重的错误,是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”,有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的,大家可以设想一下,一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分,那将得不偿失。因此,认清各种各样的语法错误,尽可能地避免少犯,对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将我们在阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类,抽出其中的典型错误,以警示大家,供参考。# a5 O( d% {, D
1.句子成分残缺不全
3 l+ T. @' x T* O! q7 z$ u1 N We always working till late at night before taking exams.(误)
+ W$ d& z( a S; e# V( O We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams(正)5 q9 s. ~& {5 Y! o! d) Y
We should read books may be useful to us. (误)/ o) {- N Q$ @
We should read books which may be useful to us. (正)
! |4 |3 @* V# v1 C3 B 2.句子成分多余
4 E' E) w, y- n+ b) y$ Q This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误)
) j Q4 y, B9 S! b One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)
+ ]( H2 F4 ?7 Y4 [( p The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误)
N9 B9 [; e2 L/ `2 q/ n+ D The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正)
5 h+ H2 o& A k6 M8 b3 ^ 3.主谓不一致7 R/ Z# @1 R2 M; i+ g) \% A5 b% z8 c
Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误)
0 w4 c, t) w) w" j1 W Some think that reading should be selective. (正)! S2 x& r2 p/ S
My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误)# a& e1 X) v; x
My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正) M9 i4 {3 D3 y5 v) I
4.动词时态、语态的误用
/ Z9 z, U( `/ `9 w8 u0 @ I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误), Q: ^4 F+ R. E3 x/ i+ i3 x
I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)$ |8 A6 O4 C, `" `
We have little time to read some books which we interest. (误): [) P+ M* |) V! t) t4 A
We have little time to read some books in which we are interested. (正)
5 H K' `- y( _0 t& u* u I am a student who has studying in the college for two years. (误)
- o9 ?2 i. k0 B8 m1 \+ ? I have been studying in the college for two years(正)) l4 y, K# m/ i- N# s
5.词类混淆
; T0 c( g9 l' F% U9 I3 W k) R It is my point that reading must be selectively. (误)
4 a$ c; k% k' }; Y( L: j In my opinion, reading must be selective. (正)9 s+ |. l& W5 K% J* O% c
Honest is so important for everyperson. (误)
9 J( ?! J9 h) d Honesty is so important for everyone. (正)/ r1 k9 g" `: t) z- _0 R
The old man was hit by a car when he across the street. (误)/ Y1 g$ ] Q6 l( A
The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. (正) |