语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中,语法错误,尤其是较为严重的错误,是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”,有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的,大家可以设想一下,一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分,那将得不偿失。因此,认清各种各样的语法错误,尽可能地避免少犯,对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将我们在阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类,抽出其中的典型错误,以警示大家,供参考。' y' a b1 X4 R2 r3 T) l. q
1.句子成分残缺不全- Y- q% a9 R# p8 Q" c2 k a
We always working till late at night before taking exams.(误)/ x2 P3 K5 ?+ e6 R" b. X7 S
We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams(正)7 G6 v7 B4 w {! N0 \
We should read books may be useful to us. (误), [4 G$ P( O+ y
We should read books which may be useful to us. (正)' W* Q' y! y/ c w3 T/ l/ p
2.句子成分多余
1 H; ?2 M7 U+ n2 s8 `; J This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误)
2 l5 S# w: ~" m3 \" D. @5 A9 h5 ~ One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)
. m' A( d v8 D* F; E, X The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误)
# [$ A6 v" k/ \1 w4 y The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正)
7 E* c6 ?% {3 |1 z* e" D; I' ]# b: `4 z 3.主谓不一致" ?3 _' l" e# o K3 c; y" L
Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误)
) B2 w" ~' x' N; f/ G$ ?: C' t" u2 q Some think that reading should be selective. (正)1 g: ?! H5 N3 r! A2 S- e- a1 V
My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误)
2 q3 ~3 p; v1 b My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正)
w9 z* ]- b, @* Q, S6 d z: D 4.动词时态、语态的误用
% Q4 p, n+ e7 u I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)1 o* I0 X8 U; Z3 n
I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)- g: a2 F8 P0 K0 p
We have little time to read some books which we interest. (误)
/ ]. p' L7 |3 n7 p, A9 P We have little time to read some books in which we are interested. (正)
: i/ t9 V0 h" M6 @ I am a student who has studying in the college for two years. (误)5 o8 Q, d$ q" }( Y, @
I have been studying in the college for two years(正)
7 v8 ~: L; m" f0 X) t 5.词类混淆
3 S4 H! g" C! \" |: i It is my point that reading must be selectively. (误)
, I9 V0 Y3 p+ g; e3 [; A In my opinion, reading must be selective. (正)& N# u9 b+ i2 u0 Y6 d/ ~
Honest is so important for everyperson. (误)
9 m. ?& T5 Q9 H% r8 K( X Honesty is so important for everyone. (正)
3 Z0 \& O2 _5 P The old man was hit by a car when he across the street. (误)! F3 z7 G, m; v/ b
The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. (正) |