语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中,语法错误,尤其是较为严重的错误,是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”,有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的,大家可以设想一下,一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分,那将得不偿失。因此,认清各种各样的语法错误,尽可能地避免少犯,对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将我们在阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类,抽出其中的典型错误,以警示大家,供参考。
) k0 u$ ~: u4 e3 L: L 1.句子成分残缺不全
8 z& _8 L" B/ i7 ?3 e; O) L* @ We always working till late at night before taking exams.(误)
+ w2 N2 T; z! s# o We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams(正)+ m7 X, s3 M; b
We should read books may be useful to us. (误); R5 G( u, f& z0 L7 d0 h) R2 L- ~( [
We should read books which may be useful to us. (正)# O( P$ j# v7 d+ j5 _( b5 g
2.句子成分多余
! w( k6 L* `, _, q% |* Y/ Y This test is end, but there is another test is waiting for you. (误)) l6 h* Y2 y4 h l' b
One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)* A; ?& u5 n) w
The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误)
`) A8 ^$ G- I: a% P9 Q, o The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正)
" w0 F- N6 w0 F$ t; `" B* K" Y! k 3.主谓不一致
8 g3 z1 @$ D1 e, k; M6 `$ F Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误)# v- M; F0 d1 N8 Q. ?& X) D
Some think that reading should be selective. (正)
" \! c3 v% S& F. q My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误)
8 @2 c' W5 R0 Y. d; v1 E4 S2 B My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正)! ?4 N* q" Q. Z. D- {9 L5 ]8 w
4.动词时态、语态的误用
8 d4 X" L4 t8 A9 N; T9 B I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)
4 a4 P& u7 j9 O2 h. A4 ?: O- b# M I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)8 H( G1 s- W; }0 t
We have little time to read some books which we interest. (误)
4 Z8 j4 c) ]; O& `% p We have little time to read some books in which we are interested. (正)
" {! Q) q b/ ]. } I am a student who has studying in the college for two years. (误)
9 Y7 L& g( O6 v' i I have been studying in the college for two years(正)
3 |0 ~/ w+ }% g. J' R 5.词类混淆
6 M; U0 r% ]0 r+ V3 x, A3 o4 { It is my point that reading must be selectively. (误)
# j1 D% R# F9 v1 M" F4 i In my opinion, reading must be selective. (正)
1 v: W( ^$ k8 Q" `& f( f4 h$ R Honest is so important for everyperson. (误)/ U; w+ P5 D' \5 u6 \3 l
Honesty is so important for everyone. (正)7 K8 R) y7 Q! m3 d
The old man was hit by a car when he across the street. (误)" n$ S# d1 c% C4 Z o3 b
The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. (正) |