His vision would help creating a middle class in the U.S., __1__
$ @0 X: T U. i: S9 R2 a& ~$ L1 ]9 h one marked by urbanization, rising wages and some free time in6 r2 Q! X! }( F. h2 Z. h& e; V
which to spend it. When Ford left the family farm at age 16 and __2__" R+ c% i0 {6 ^3 `+ w
walked eight miles to his first job in Detroit machine shop ,only 2 __3__# C8 ^% Z0 S" L. f; _$ N0 o2 C
out of 8 Americans live in the cities. By World War II that figure __4__, f; E: B7 c& i) W; a
would double, and the affordable Model T was one reason of it. __5__
/ l7 L; c" p4 c' _& [) x People flocked to Detroit for jobs, and unless they worked in one of __6__& U3 ?! q: Q1 E/ g
Henry’s factories, they could afford one of his cars— it is a virtuous3 b" y. Y' X) @* _0 y, r
circle, and he was the ringmaster. By the time production
( g J- f' v: ? r" n2 w, } ceased for the model T in 1927, more than 15 million cars have __7__' U# @, ]5 ], s0 s. t4 U% D
been sold— or half the world’s output. S. F! ?4 Q1 z# m7 T
Nobody was more of an inspiration to Ford to the great inventor __8__
- m8 J, E& {: H4 L4 v b# B4 @. ` Thomas Edison. At the turning of the century Edison had blessed __9__
; @3 v' n5 n5 t% v6 [6 r: w8 |6 O2 | Ford’s pursuit of an efficient, gas-powering car during a chance __10__: s9 {. x& h9 M+ \" G; i
meeting at Detroit’s Edison illuminating Co., where Ford was
5 C! h1 X% Z' Z( X7 x# V chief engineer.1 x1 e1 N* I1 P
答案:
. u* y: N9 L6 ` 1.将creating改为create9 X4 L2 U& \) f
help 后面一般接(to)do sth
0 a* {% p1 C# X5 L: @7 ? 2.将it改为them
8 p( j' ?4 M; y. h Spend的宾语实际上是rising wages,为复数,所以应该用代词them。# r( N! H' \7 Y" z
3.Detroit前加a
$ H5 \: e2 ~) x6 j! }/ ? Shop是可数名词,所以前面要有限定词。- d7 _& a/ o v$ K7 }3 ]- v2 N
4.将live改为lived! N t; J* H. B
讲述的是福特16岁的时候的事情。
0 r# X9 ?: `+ X% ]' K 5.将of 改为for" U) x+ G9 j6 C' M) a( S$ r
The reason for…是 固定搭配,表示……的原因。
! n3 t7 J$ r3 y5 _ 6.将unless改为if# t& h+ X# m4 U. n. X1 `# o7 D+ S5 G
通过逻辑分析,句子意思是,如果他们能在福特的工厂工作,他们就能买得起他的汽车—这是一个良性循环。) J( i- a" p( u& m( d
7.将have改为had
m4 l! b) M2 O+ U- b7 E “到1927年截止”,这里必须是用过去完成时。
8 Y0 g* ]0 ?- M7 P 8.将第二个to改为than0 g4 y! g% M; D% ^4 a
这是一个“more…than”的结构。意思是“没有人比爱迪生给福特的激励更大”。
4 t& w4 Q6 P- L/ [: [0 _6 x 9.将turning改为turn,或者在turning后加上point
( J) }9 z5 G% r$ \. K, m 10.powering改为powered, K% v: e9 p9 ~5 w' s7 N% g" p; D( p
power 作为动词,意思是“给……提供动力”,所以这里应该用被动的过去分词。 |