His vision would help creating a middle class in the U.S., __1__$ Y' a5 a i4 M: n1 o$ q9 d/ e: y
one marked by urbanization, rising wages and some free time in0 G+ c" t3 `' L7 _
which to spend it. When Ford left the family farm at age 16 and __2__3 a8 b9 v4 }; A0 G
walked eight miles to his first job in Detroit machine shop ,only 2 __3__
3 D4 D0 q2 [1 q out of 8 Americans live in the cities. By World War II that figure __4__
, U$ E Q3 N/ }/ [- s3 j would double, and the affordable Model T was one reason of it. __5__
9 l4 L8 d0 E, O0 x: M9 [1 Y, ?) t People flocked to Detroit for jobs, and unless they worked in one of __6__
( v: y, |# C% I# K# q Henry’s factories, they could afford one of his cars— it is a virtuous
9 [: J0 q. H% e circle, and he was the ringmaster. By the time production
& p8 Z0 L' o: ~2 T$ X ceased for the model T in 1927, more than 15 million cars have __7__
; d' z0 ^2 b( _! A3 z8 k# q/ J( @/ K been sold— or half the world’s output.* ]0 j' A4 H! D, c% k a
Nobody was more of an inspiration to Ford to the great inventor __8__( q, ] \, r8 X/ w
Thomas Edison. At the turning of the century Edison had blessed __9__ P, a; f5 }. S- [
Ford’s pursuit of an efficient, gas-powering car during a chance __10__- ]# G7 K3 s7 n# y* B6 D t( a, i- R
meeting at Detroit’s Edison illuminating Co., where Ford was( F. m) m1 d/ v! A7 b; h! E
chief engineer.3 b' [. k) ~) }) t- M
答案:
J3 [7 e, K3 I; m4 _5 i 1.将creating改为create# g% V: i+ S T
help 后面一般接(to)do sth
, v( J2 \. Y1 ~& N 2.将it改为them
# B, b6 @- b# j- }% H Spend的宾语实际上是rising wages,为复数,所以应该用代词them。
7 R: q/ ]+ \0 J# j. ` 3.Detroit前加a: C" X8 T0 j5 j* g( I" R' _
Shop是可数名词,所以前面要有限定词。+ A$ U3 L [* ?& @1 A
4.将live改为lived
" N2 _( u& _3 I 讲述的是福特16岁的时候的事情。1 F9 O. C0 s+ i; ^4 Q' h8 k
5.将of 改为for
- p( s! }5 b6 j/ X+ E! [) g The reason for…是 固定搭配,表示……的原因。( x. b& K5 }, n7 e7 F+ o
6.将unless改为if6 s% q4 `* s! A. B+ W0 l
通过逻辑分析,句子意思是,如果他们能在福特的工厂工作,他们就能买得起他的汽车—这是一个良性循环。* L' m; u% y/ _( `+ o; N# F# w
7.将have改为had) M' W# x1 W* M/ Y8 Z
“到1927年截止”,这里必须是用过去完成时。
5 X" R1 T+ c9 K& s8 O. \ 8.将第二个to改为than
2 T7 j. W, @8 u3 A$ {4 R% ^& p 这是一个“more…than”的结构。意思是“没有人比爱迪生给福特的激励更大”。" @) O- i; q# D8 G2 K
9.将turning改为turn,或者在turning后加上point
( \ H3 S0 g7 l( } b 10.powering改为powered7 O+ x, Y& f% B7 C, ~
power 作为动词,意思是“给……提供动力”,所以这里应该用被动的过去分词。 |