英语专业八级改错练习题及答案解析(114)

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　　When I decided to return back to school at the __1__
0 V1 e3 V6 t' L/ `1 _, z1 o　　age of thirty-five, I wasn’t at all worried for my __2__
　　ability to do the work. After all, I was a grown
# k8 _3 N5 T% A8 d4 P　　woman who has raised a family, not a confused__3__
7 L' Y% [, y6 a% _9 m( [8 d+ P　　teenager freshly out of school. But when I __4__
　　started classes, I realized that those “confused
　　teenagers” who sitting around me were in __5__
　　more better shape for college than I was. They still__6__
　　had all their classroom skills in bright, shiny__7__
　　condition, while mine grown rusty from disuse. I__8__
0 o% \/ U% r/ w: @, U　　had totally forgotten how to locate information in
- Y( Z( i+ a) ^. `1 o4 Z　　a library, what to write a report, __9__
　　or even how to speak up in class discussion. __10__
+ h: b/ y1 w" A) k　　答案及解析：
　　1.
: y! w/ W4 q" H- Z* h　　去掉back
　　return本身就相当于back或go back，此处back意义重复
2 t& J/ n; o  e, w# E/ C" f8 D　　2.
　　for改为about
　　worry about是固定词组，表示“为……担心”，而worry for后加人时表示“为某人担心”
　　3.
9 ~- _, v- W3 n( {+ f( V0 P　　has改为had
　　定语从句中时态应与主句一致
　　4.
　　freshly改为fresh
　　fresh out of school作后置定语修饰teenager。freshly只有与过去分词连用时才表示recently
　　5.
　　去掉who或将sitting改为sat
: V) D% U7 `2 b6 E. Q# R, p$ U　　6.
　　more改为much
　　修饰强调比较级better
. \/ ~0 d9 ^2 W0 q( b　　7.
　　classrooms改为classroom
: Y! A% D5 Z+ S1 m7 A　　classroom在此处是名词作定语修饰skill，不能用复数
　　8.
0 X3 ^# q6 |% b, z8 U　　mine后加had
　　过去分词grown不能单独作谓语，并且需要表示出在过去的过去“我的技能早已生锈”
　　9.
/ V* S( G) h  Z8 P& h' |　　what改为how
　　write后已有宾语，应用how表示方式
　　10.
( m& n8 f" b* @4 _$ h　　or改为and