专业八级改错练习题及答案解析(1)

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　　About half of the infant and maternal deaths in developing countries could
" L: a. x2 J1 z6 C" g/ M/ S1 W& {, L　　be avoided if women had used family planning methods to prevent high risk ____1____
2 g" H: i% u+ b) w  j* ]　　pregnancies, according to a report publishing recently by the Johns Hopking ____2____
' X5 l8 Z# }2 i6 N　　University.
3 S; ?) p, k$ r( `2 A　　The report indicates that 5.6 million infant deaths and 2,000,000 maternal
　　Deaths could be prevented this year if women chose to have theirs children ____3____
/ j  f9 _" u* ?. y7 X　　within the safest years with adequate intervals among births and limited their ____4____
　　families to moderate size.
　　This amounts to about half of the 9.8 million infant and 370.000 maternal
　　deaths in developing countries, excluded China, estimated for this year by ____5____
* N3 P$ m3 P+ N8 z　　the United Nation’s Children’s Fund and the US Centers for Disease Control
" R9 H7 r& r% p7 V- E9 u2 J/ z* e　　respectably. China was excluded because very few births occur in the high ____6____
　　risk categories.
$ H3 d0 E7 I. S7 I3 B3 w　　The report says that evidences from around the world shows the risk of ____7____
: z% S2 R/ ~) Z" o4 T% m4 ^　　maternal or infant ill and death is the highest in four specific types of ____8_____
　　pregnancy; pregnancies before the mother is 18 year old; those after the ____9____
　　mother is 35 years old; pregnancies after four births; and those lesser than ____10____
　　two years apart.
　　参考答案及解析:
/ C0 `5 [& Q5 J　　1 将had used 改为 used。
　　因为此句是虚拟语气，表示与现在事实相反，故条件从句中应使用一般过去时。例如：
$ X4 G2 F9 l$ O　　Many would be wise if they did not think themselves wise. 许多人原本会成为聪明人－如果他们不自以为聪明的话。
9 t  ?' j: r4 i" H' B1 z% y# ^* h　　2 将publishing改为published
　　report和publish时逻辑动宾关系，故应使用publish的过去分词短语来修饰report。例如：
. U) L& G( g) g# m- ^　　Any discovery that we may make, however small, will remain acquired knowledge. 任何可能的发现，不管多么微不足道，都将成为知识宝库中的一部分。
　　3 将theirs改为their
) ]6 e8 Q$ N% S$ Z5 J　　4 将among改为between
　　在两次怀孕期间留出足够的间隔时间，故用between。
: b1 u8 H3 `( h, H+ F, w　　5 将过去分词excluded改为介词excluding。
! ~" C5 @8 J% \- y8 s* F! U( f( \　　excluding意为“不包括…”
, V3 e5 Z. {) h　　6 将respectably改为respectively
% i$ [4 [, D3 |+ q+ H" U- {: f+ E　　respectively 意为 “分别地 ”，符合句子的意思。而respectably意为 “可敬的，值得尊敬地 ”。
　　7将evidences改为evidence。
　　evidence是不可数名词。
% |; W6 j5 r9 Q  E, U　　8将ill改为illness。
4 W. E/ i4 O- G2 L' m　　9将year改为years。
　　10将lesser改为less