专业八级改错练习题及答案解析(1)

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　　About half of the infant and maternal deaths in developing countries could
　　be avoided if women had used family planning methods to prevent high risk ____1____
6 Q+ Q( u: o! D  s2 c/ X/ P) c　　pregnancies, according to a report publishing recently by the Johns Hopking ____2____
　　University.
　　The report indicates that 5.6 million infant deaths and 2,000,000 maternal
; D  s5 }, a* L  g. V　　Deaths could be prevented this year if women chose to have theirs children ____3____
( @3 r" H3 b# @$ X　　within the safest years with adequate intervals among births and limited their ____4____
　　families to moderate size.
　　This amounts to about half of the 9.8 million infant and 370.000 maternal
" ]! i4 |& |5 D; g7 B　　deaths in developing countries, excluded China, estimated for this year by ____5____
　　the United Nation’s Children’s Fund and the US Centers for Disease Control
　　respectably. China was excluded because very few births occur in the high ____6____
　　risk categories.
　　The report says that evidences from around the world shows the risk of ____7____
- R8 [% c  W% e% m　　maternal or infant ill and death is the highest in four specific types of ____8_____
+ b8 S3 O* w7 ~% W9 [  j. c　　pregnancy; pregnancies before the mother is 18 year old; those after the ____9____
　　mother is 35 years old; pregnancies after four births; and those lesser than ____10____
( I9 J! q0 V  T1 J　　two years apart.
. A: Q3 O: e0 K& w% P　　参考答案及解析:
　　1 将had used 改为 used。
6 d' R; Z5 U0 V. K　　因为此句是虚拟语气，表示与现在事实相反，故条件从句中应使用一般过去时。例如：
6 S4 S# b* \5 R6 q　　Many would be wise if they did not think themselves wise. 许多人原本会成为聪明人－如果他们不自以为聪明的话。
　　2 将publishing改为published
　　report和publish时逻辑动宾关系，故应使用publish的过去分词短语来修饰report。例如：
　　Any discovery that we may make, however small, will remain acquired knowledge. 任何可能的发现，不管多么微不足道，都将成为知识宝库中的一部分。
　　3 将theirs改为their
　　4 将among改为between
& E4 |% R! O( H6 J% F( ~' I　　在两次怀孕期间留出足够的间隔时间，故用between。
　　5 将过去分词excluded改为介词excluding。
　　excluding意为“不包括…”
" ~* s# R& ]: Q$ \' ]2 S2 L　　6 将respectably改为respectively
% N9 w; ^* P( k. u5 l# A& F　　respectively 意为 “分别地 ”，符合句子的意思。而respectably意为 “可敬的，值得尊敬地 ”。
# C" X4 b, \3 u. j0 D6 v　　7将evidences改为evidence。
　　evidence是不可数名词。
　　8将ill改为illness。
　　9将year改为years。
　　10将lesser改为less