Childhood is a time when there are few responsibilities to make life difficult. If a child has good parents,
) N+ }: W( I5 ~6 }8 f1 f heis fed, looked after and loved, what he may do, It is improbable that he will ever again in his life __1__) y( V0 R7 c6 N. ^) I8 X) g
be given so much without having to do anything in turn. In addition, life is always presenting __2__7 ?$ M, p2 i! E" @
new things to the child—things that have lost their interesting for older people because __3__% L7 E& j8 U$ n8 a6 a. W3 n) [
they are too well-known. A child finds pleasure in playing in the rain, or in the snow.8 b5 J8 M& F. `5 R. {
His first visit to the seaside is a marvelous adventure. But a child has his pains:He is not so free to do__4__
7 c) U; x8 x+ d8 {7 {+ } as he wishes as he thinks old people do; he is continually being told not to do things,5 ]2 D6 {+ ~/ Z! A
or being punished for that he has done wrong. His life is therefore __5__# t$ v* R1 L" o$ m; y
not longer perfectly happy. When the young man starts to earn his own living, __6__+ S& ?2 N- {$ S2 a+ E4 z# R
he becomes free from the discipline of school and parents;but at the same time he
( W* V* v N5 i# q) G$ C( r' w D is forced to accept responsibilities.He can not longer expect others to pay for his food, his clothes,
8 f& u& u0 {; B) I7 Y# f8 d and his room,but has to work if he wants to live comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in __7__9 c/ {4 B! `4 g0 e1 V! F( K# v
the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. __8__
0 K' l$ Q& N# c And if he breaks the laws of society as he used to break& P* A7 R$ m0 G. G: R& F
the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, __9__, F; M3 D7 E/ J& q
he works hard, keeps out of trouble and has good health,
( d( W) x p8 M, { ?+ T5 @( o1 y he can have the great happiness of seeing himself making steady progress in his job __10__% J/ `% F! I) A. C/ K; V
and of building up for himself his own position in society.
* F9 I0 g5 d {( v 答案：
! a ~, z* v8 O% |( Z1 | 1.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句，相当于no matter what，意思是“无论什么”，“不管什么”，whatever在从句中作宾语。
; |9 f; l7 U. u* {+ v% U. \8 I 2.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”，而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。7 k, L9 H7 D, J6 T
3.interesting改为interest。在形容词性物主代词their的后面应跟名词性成分。
1 [9 r- q2 I' ~ 4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。
* n! c7 g" w9 X 5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句，在本句中应该使用关系代词what，相当于the thing/ things that。
. a; E, L$ V" t" k4 H' g( f8 W$ G 6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer”
# J3 @6 k( g4 Q 7.comfortable改为comfortably。修饰动词live应为副词而不是形容词。0 p- N+ _4 n, m3 I+ m0 X
8.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。, j1 Y& k2 o+ P" i/ x# Q. C
9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。
' W. @& y* x! ^$ y9 h9 y: \+ s7 ~8 D 10.making 改为 make |
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