Childhood is a time when there are few responsibilities to make life difficult. If a child has good parents,
; |2 u+ b/ D. z) b: U heis fed, looked after and loved, what he may do, It is improbable that he will ever again in his life __1__
+ |" F0 O4 F& \ be given so much without having to do anything in turn. In addition, life is always presenting __2__
5 r1 ^4 u0 y- q new things to the child—things that have lost their interesting for older people because __3__( [- e3 \/ z) m! r5 `
they are too well-known. A child finds pleasure in playing in the rain, or in the snow.
3 L5 u5 d* H4 h" Y His first visit to the seaside is a marvelous adventure. But a child has his pains:He is not so free to do__4__ U/ N0 R( E* z! u2 u7 P5 d
as he wishes as he thinks old people do; he is continually being told not to do things,
' o8 R2 q$ v6 L- T: U or being punished for that he has done wrong. His life is therefore __5__# Q6 X U, \& r6 b
not longer perfectly happy. When the young man starts to earn his own living, __6__
5 t* }$ N2 b7 k+ j3 R he becomes free from the discipline of school and parents;but at the same time he
: {! p+ B# ^( x2 Q% v2 O is forced to accept responsibilities.He can not longer expect others to pay for his food, his clothes,) F0 b( B! P7 H6 j8 e+ ]" B# s
and his room,but has to work if he wants to live comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in __7__
0 ~+ ^+ u2 y- h9 T# Z& v* b' b the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. __8__/ ]$ G+ S4 B+ Z
And if he breaks the laws of society as he used to break3 V% A% ]7 i/ g9 p3 ~1 k& X
the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, __9__$ C' ?2 h7 d4 V& Y# f3 h: J9 t3 k
he works hard, keeps out of trouble and has good health,
# W/ h* B3 B5 L; i4 V. [; A he can have the great happiness of seeing himself making steady progress in his job __10__
_6 L2 g; s/ Z+ [; R# z1 { and of building up for himself his own position in society.4 g, Y! D" I' A) a0 o
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1.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句，相当于no matter what，意思是“无论什么”，“不管什么”，whatever在从句中作宾语。
0 W ] V: Q+ K 2.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”，而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。1 j D3 R2 g8 Y" J0 f/ @; B. W
3.interesting改为interest。在形容词性物主代词their的后面应跟名词性成分。* q9 E4 {( `9 y/ I Z' T
4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。
; M0 Z# a- a; ~% R5 \- ~) {: a 5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句，在本句中应该使用关系代词what，相当于the thing/ things that。% z/ e8 N, W7 \3 g# p$ X
6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer”; g2 P9 o" B+ ^9 ^4 ?
7.comfortable改为comfortably。修饰动词live应为副词而不是形容词。
# c9 A6 m" |3 H 8.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。
% J' Q) B5 I Y W 9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。
4 q1 n* l0 F. r, _) |1 M 10.making 改为 make |
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