Childhood is a time when there are few responsibilities to make life difficult. If a child has good parents,
, ]- R! N2 D, \4 s) i heis fed, looked after and loved, what he may do, It is improbable that he will ever again in his life __1__
1 W1 S( N+ N5 P: i3 e3 s" P be given so much without having to do anything in turn. In addition, life is always presenting __2__
- Y1 X% w- i% d6 i, o4 z new things to the child—things that have lost their interesting for older people because __3__
1 }9 F, z: i) ` Y3 ^ they are too well-known. A child finds pleasure in playing in the rain, or in the snow.* Y9 E- W' b6 e5 m* M
His first visit to the seaside is a marvelous adventure. But a child has his pains:He is not so free to do__4__6 `+ I$ i1 @4 O9 `' S+ }$ Z5 p
as he wishes as he thinks old people do; he is continually being told not to do things,& H# a3 |% T' C! E
or being punished for that he has done wrong. His life is therefore __5__, }; ?- X0 m; `0 m
not longer perfectly happy. When the young man starts to earn his own living, __6__ g. F: g( A3 ^
he becomes free from the discipline of school and parents;but at the same time he0 K$ c; \; Q1 a6 l$ {: `+ T8 `
is forced to accept responsibilities.He can not longer expect others to pay for his food, his clothes,
3 @0 r9 [: A6 _- G N/ y and his room,but has to work if he wants to live comfortable. If he spends most of his time playing about in __7__4 v/ M! i8 V& D {
the way that he used to as a child, he will suffer hungry. __8__
) `/ O, N: x/ R& {' j7 A And if he breaks the laws of society as he used to break
; L6 i$ P# I u) W9 H5 R the laws of his parents, he may go to prison. If, therefore, __9__
' @5 _3 p3 O( }" v5 l. F he works hard, keeps out of trouble and has good health,# K; l7 q* v( p: E3 c, \; Y9 [! O# y
he can have the great happiness of seeing himself making steady progress in his job __10__
1 n& X8 Y; G1 j6 a8 g8 Y and of building up for himself his own position in society.
+ h/ P8 |' `! _2 j: }' N 答案：6 I N& `' p) _3 C
1.what改为whatever。whatever引导让步状语从句，相当于no matter what，意思是“无论什么”，“不管什么”，whatever在从句中作宾语。7 l1 g" O" J+ m
2.turn改为return。短语in turn表示“轮流地; 挨个, 依次; 反过来”，而在这里是指孩子对父母的回报。
! u! z, y9 n2 T6 a0 ^, y+ p1 ]/ h! j 3.interesting改为interest。在形容词性物主代词their的后面应跟名词性成分。
: F# y" _, l% [% E 4.第一个do改为 are。与前面的is相对应。! J/ O4 x. }% @9 Y# l U
5.that改为what。that引导的是定语从句，在本句中应该使用关系代词what，相当于the thing/ things that。
! j9 t4 r, S6 @) W5 ] 6.not改为no。固定搭配的副词短语“no longer”
$ m! C- _; j* F+ B 7.comfortable改为comfortably。修饰动词live应为副词而不是形容词。
7 u8 S% i, V5 b) J N P9 n 8.suffer改为go或become或be。或把hungry改为hunger。
% |; a- H& E7 z* a1 {. n4 V 9.therefore改为however。此处的条件状语从句表示转折。
# ^, Q; o r5 ~( f* Z 10.making 改为 make |
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