大家来找错之大学专业八级的改错练习11

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　　Artists use caricature to distort the human face or figure for comic affect, __1__while at the same time capturing an identifiable likeness and suggests the essence __2__of the personality or character beneath the surface. The humor lies in the fact __3__the caricature is recognizable, and yet exaggerated.
　　From their origin in Europe as witty sketches, caricature grew through __4__the eighteenth and nineteenth century, becoming enormously popular in __5__the United States early in this century. In 1920s and 1930s especially,
- @9 O6 f( V) a　　this lively form of illustration was appeared in newspapers and __6__magazines throughout the country. The caricaturists in this era drew his __7__portraits of important figures primary to entertain. In spirit their work was __8__close to the humor of the fast-developing comic strip and gag cartoon than to the __9__string of political satire. Their subjects were more often amusing than offended __10__by amiable attacks.
　　答案：
　　1 将affect改为effect,affect是动词。effect是名词。
　　2 将suggests改为 suggesting,这是一个以while引导的从句，其中suggest应该与capturing并列。
' p4 z# b' x5 K" A. X! X　　3在fact后面加上that,因为引导同位语从句的关系词不可以省略。
" _7 T; e" x# c0 ]7 u　　4 将their改为its,这里its指代单数名词caricature
! B/ Z* }+ s0 g3 o& }& n' n　　5 将century改为复数形式
  X# U5 d2 a1 ?4 [- P9 |" R　　6 将was省略,appear是不及物动词，不应用于被动语态。
# S. Q* Z8 _7 E, P　　7 将his改为their,这里指代复数名词 the caricaturists
' s% {' i4 F  M3 `　　8 将primary改为primarily,primarily在这里做状语，修饰不定式短语
6 J2 @3 @( o: R9 J4 Q$ z　　9 将close改为比较级形式closer,从后面的连词than，可以看出，这里使用了比较状语从句
　　10 将amusing改为 amused,主语subject（受攻击的人）和amuse的逻辑关系是动宾关系，应使用过去分词形式。