大家来找错之大学专业八级的改错练习11

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　　Artists use caricature to distort the human face or figure for comic affect, __1__while at the same time capturing an identifiable likeness and suggests the essence __2__of the personality or character beneath the surface. The humor lies in the fact __3__the caricature is recognizable, and yet exaggerated.
+ d4 Y3 W. x1 A8 F0 g　　From their origin in Europe as witty sketches, caricature grew through __4__the eighteenth and nineteenth century, becoming enormously popular in __5__the United States early in this century. In 1920s and 1930s especially,
3 H8 P0 g7 [) y1 ?　　this lively form of illustration was appeared in newspapers and __6__magazines throughout the country. The caricaturists in this era drew his __7__portraits of important figures primary to entertain. In spirit their work was __8__close to the humor of the fast-developing comic strip and gag cartoon than to the __9__string of political satire. Their subjects were more often amusing than offended __10__by amiable attacks.
　　答案：
　　1 将affect改为effect,affect是动词。effect是名词。
' j4 t& h4 y6 h3 o* N+ w. K+ I7 B, E　　2 将suggests改为 suggesting,这是一个以while引导的从句，其中suggest应该与capturing并列。
. Z8 c8 T+ d/ K4 \　　3在fact后面加上that,因为引导同位语从句的关系词不可以省略。
6 v$ N+ j3 P& J( o) g/ K' N　　4 将their改为its,这里its指代单数名词caricature
9 T( f4 B8 `) t' S　　5 将century改为复数形式
　　6 将was省略,appear是不及物动词，不应用于被动语态。
& s% m# g" W0 C# o, w7 @　　7 将his改为their,这里指代复数名词 the caricaturists
　　8 将primary改为primarily,primarily在这里做状语，修饰不定式短语
8 p  c- F9 M/ {; d　　9 将close改为比较级形式closer,从后面的连词than，可以看出，这里使用了比较状语从句
　　10 将amusing改为 amused,主语subject（受攻击的人）和amuse的逻辑关系是动宾关系，应使用过去分词形式。